The Last Cognition

"The silence fades with a soft embrace,"
like twilight slipping beneath hospital blinds.
My body becomes stillness in slow motion—
the breath between two worlds.
Machines hum with patient doubt
as I drift from heartbeat into hush.

Somewhere, a hand still holds mine,
believing I might stir, return.
But inside, I am loosening—
thoughts folding like paper birds,
memories sinking below their names,
the self undoing, gently.

Neurons dim like distant towns at night,
each light a moment letting go.
The mind that once held oceans
now softens into shoreless sky.
Not pain, not fear—just quiet,
settling into the folds of forever.

A hush gathers deep within the brain,
not silence, but a final kindness.
Breath becomes an echo,
heartbeat a distant drum.
Even the machines seem to whisper,
as if they too know I’m leaving.

"The silence fades with a soft embrace"—
no rupture, no sudden dark,
only the slow return to where I began.
I leave no sound, but warmth remains—
like light after a flame is gone,
or a name whispered too softly to hear.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Daniels Avatar
May 22, 2025 at 8:47 PM
Lovely ! Tenderly written like silence & softness itself. Neutrons dim like distant towns at night = exquisite description. Congrats on this beautiful gift. Xx
O'Neil Avatar
May 24, 2025 at 8:45 AM
Thank you so much for your wonderfully kind and poetic feedback. I’m truly touched that the description resonated so deeply with you. I really appreciate your congratulations and support.
May Avatar
May 22, 2025 at 12:42 PM
"The mind that once held oceans now softens into shoreless sky." A poignant and peaceful journey through life's last hush, Well penned, Congrats on your win
O'Neil Avatar
May 24, 2025 at 8:44 AM
Thank you very much for your thoughtful words. I’m truly honoured by your congratulations and glad the poem’s journey resonated with you. I appreciate your kindness and support.
Hind Avatar
May 18, 2025 at 8:08 PM
You write with so much emotion. It really grabs my heart- you have been through so much.
O'Neil Avatar
May 19, 2025 at 1:32 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words. I’ve only been writing for about a month—but it has already helped tremendously with my mental health. Expressing my emotions through poetry has been an important part of my healing journey, and I’m grateful it resonates with others as well.
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