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The Last Candle

The Last Candle “Hamish!, Hamish!” “Yes, my dear?” “I am close to death I fear” As he held her hand, Her pleas and her pain Were clear to understand “Hamish!, Hamish!” “Yes, dearest love?” “Will I be received up above?” As she held her cross, Her prayers and her doubts Were profit and loss. “Hamish!, Hamish!” “Yes, my flower?” “Is my life within your power?” As he held his stethoscope, He bowed his head in defeat As there was no hope. “Hamish!, Hamish!” “Yes, my light?” “What is that candle in this deep deep night?” As her hand relaxed in his He kissed her cheek And closed her lids With slightly trembling fingertips.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/6/2014 11:25:00 PM
Candle lights.
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Date: 10/6/2014 10:56:00 PM
Emotions are really felt. eve
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