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Dear soil of the Earth, please hide me. I'm the last one left! I repeat once more, the last one left! I have no legs to crawl and hide. And I'm so easy to spot when I fall. Squirrels with perked-up whiskers pick up my scent. I'm a perennial favorite of theirs, you see. I'm a snack... they enjoy munching on. Or perhaps more than a snack? Aren't I all they eat? Let there be a gale so I'll be blown far out of sight. I'm target no. 1! Let there be a raging flood to wash me away. Why do I always feel like a sitting duck? God willing, I'll grow into an oak tree before a squirrel finds me! I hate feeling the sharp teeth of a rodent digging into me. Oh, the anxiety! The horror! The dreadful anticipation! What the hell makes me so edible anyway? I have no taste! Submitted for.... The Last 1 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Anthony Biaanco Date written: 12/02/2020 Date originally written: 04/18/2020

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Date: 5/7/2020 8:02:00 PM
Clever personification of the poor defenseless acorn. I've wondered that too, what do squirrels find so attractive about acorns? It can't be the taste... Well done and congrats ~ John
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/7/2020 11:11:00 PM
Thank you so much, John:-) I guess we'll never know, lol.
Date: 5/7/2020 7:03:00 PM
You built the poem to its conclusion with such anxious energy - wonderful release! So creative my friend. Congratulations on your win. This is quite delightful!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/7/2020 7:05:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sam:-) Congrats to you as well!
Date: 5/7/2020 5:38:00 PM
this is GREAT, Edward. A big congrats on your win!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/7/2020 6:43:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea:-) I appreciate it.

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