The Last

The Last

The last one... of anything 
does not automatically make it 
better, or worse... 
only that it is the last.

The best for last, 
is often spoken among the old. 
Dessert is saved until the end. 
Yet, 
new things... 
first dog, 
first cat, 
first day of school.
First kiss... 
How about that?
First taste of chocolate, 
the first night of married life. 
First child, and last child... too. 

Last is a bittersweet reward. 
Last time you see your best friend... 
Last day of school, ever.
The empty bag, the chocolate came in.
The final kiss goodbye to someone you love.
Life is full, from first to last... 
Don't waste even one moment, one breath...
or it will already be past.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Date: 7/10/2025 11:10:00 AM
Love this... All endings are firmly embedded with memories of their beginnings and best.
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Date: 5/8/2023 4:40:00 AM
Hi Ann, I really like your style of writing. The simplicity of words, the commonality of themes and the spiritual message you offer your readers.
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Date: 4/14/2023 2:36:00 PM
I agree, Ann ... one day at a time, and live it fully. It's the only way to live your life as designed by our Creator. I enjoy your thoughts shared though your poetry, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 3/8/2023 9:13:00 AM
Yes the first and last both have significance, firsts usually are exciting, lasts are usually sad. This is an inspiring wonderful poem, unique and fun to read. Kudos!! <<<<<<<<<<<<<<>>>>*>>>>>>>>>>*********** Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
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Date: 3/5/2023 3:43:00 PM
Great write, Ann, much enjoyed it. :)
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Date: 2/23/2023 10:27:00 AM
such a beautiful write and great ending advice! love it :)
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Date: 2/22/2023 6:25:00 PM
Much food for thought here, Ann. The first ones now will later be last...
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Date: 2/22/2023 4:20:00 PM
So true, Ann. It goes by in the blink of an eye. I enjoyed reading your thoughts today.
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