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The Lass and the Moon From Saskatoon

There was a young girl from Saskatoon who went to the nude beach in sunny June. When she shed her knickers to the bathers snickers, they all donned shades for the light of the moon.
April 10, 2018 Contest: Traditional Limerick Sponsor: Viv Wigley

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Date: 4/25/2018 8:31:00 AM
Ha ha, delightful. I do enjoy viewing a full moon. Especially on a beach on a sunny day.
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John Gondolf
Date: 4/25/2018 8:52:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed my humor, Richard, there is much beauty in the full moon. John
Date: 4/18/2018 8:39:00 PM
Oh, so now I see you've got Limerick in ya, ya do! (I do not) Very well done, gathered my grin, it did. You continue to delight, entertain and enthrall both me and my muse! My world is golden, still enfolding the miracle of brother in my home and medicated. I have not done Tim's taxes though (maybe I shouldn't have told you that- let me add I'm doing them tomorrow, He tends to not care as the refund goes to his ex, so I must save the busy, tax-careless man.) I talk too much. Poetry hugs -CayCay
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John Gondolf
Date: 4/18/2018 8:51:00 PM
Glad you enjoy my humor as well. I survived another tax season though I have many extensions. I made some time today to read and reconnect with PS friends. Glad to hear all is well with you and no I don’t think you talk too much, I enjoy it. Hugs to you my friend. John
Date: 4/15/2018 7:16:00 PM
good one, JOhn!! good and funny.
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John Gondolf
Date: 4/16/2018 4:36:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea.
Date: 4/14/2018 5:23:00 PM
John, great limerick, I am terrible at these cause well basically I have "no funny" well maybe a bit ~
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John Gondolf
Date: 4/15/2018 7:33:00 AM
Thanks, Constance, glad you enjoyed my humor. I don’t write many limericks either but sometimes it’s fun to do so. John
Date: 4/12/2018 8:30:00 PM
Lolol! Clever humor. Good luck in contest!
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John Gondolf
Date: 4/13/2018 5:52:00 AM
Thanks, Susan, I appreciate it.
Date: 4/10/2018 6:07:00 PM
Hello John, you should do well in the contest. I smiled when reading this poem. Have a nice evening my friend.
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John Gondolf
Date: 4/10/2018 9:48:00 PM
Thank you, Darlene, I appreciate it. John
Date: 4/10/2018 4:04:00 PM
Lol! John, This is hilarious. I could just picture the whole scene. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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John Gondolf
Date: 4/10/2018 9:33:00 PM
Thank you, Alexis, I’m glad you enjoyed it. I appreciated your comments and continued support. John
Date: 4/10/2018 3:47:00 PM
LOL! I love it! ;D
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John Gondolf
Date: 4/10/2018 9:04:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed it, Maureen, thanks. John
Date: 4/10/2018 3:32:00 PM
Absolutely hilarious John great humour:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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John Gondolf
Date: 4/10/2018 8:56:00 PM
Thanks so much, Jan, glad you enjoyed it and thanks for your suggestion. John

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