The Lass and the Moon From Saskatoon

There was a young girl from Saskatoon who went to the nude beach in sunny June. When she shed her knickers to the bathers snickers, they all donned shades for the light of the moon.
April 10, 2018 Contest: Traditional Limerick Sponsor: Viv Wigley
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Lamoureux Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 8:31 AM
Ha ha, delightful. I do enjoy viewing a full moon. Especially on a beach on a sunny day.
Gondolf Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 8:52 AM
Glad you enjoyed my humor, Richard, there is much beauty in the full moon. John
Godwin Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 8:39 PM
Oh, so now I see you've got Limerick in ya, ya do! (I do not) Very well done, gathered my grin, it did. You continue to delight, entertain and enthrall both me and my muse! My world is golden, still enfolding the miracle of brother in my home and medicated. I have not done Tim's taxes though (maybe I shouldn't have told you that- let me add I'm doing them tomorrow, He tends to not care as the refund goes to his ex, so I must save the busy, tax-careless man.) I talk too much. Poetry hugs -CayCay
Gondolf Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 8:51 PM
Glad you enjoy my humor as well. I survived another tax season though I have many extensions. I made some time today to read and reconnect with PS friends. Glad to hear all is well with you and no I don’t think you talk too much, I enjoy it. Hugs to you my friend. John
Dietrich Avatar
April 15, 2018 at 7:16 PM
good one, JOhn!! good and funny.
Gondolf Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 4:36 AM
Thank you, Andrea.
La France Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 5:23 PM
John, great limerick, I am terrible at these cause well basically I have "no funny" well maybe a bit ~
Gondolf Avatar
April 15, 2018 at 7:33 AM
Thanks, Constance, glad you enjoyed my humor. I don’t write many limericks either but sometimes it’s fun to do so. John
Gentry Avatar
April 12, 2018 at 8:30 PM
Lolol! Clever humor. Good luck in contest!
Gondolf Avatar
April 13, 2018 at 5:52 AM
Thanks, Susan, I appreciate it.
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 10, 2018 at 6:07 PM
Hello John, you should do well in the contest. I smiled when reading this poem. Have a nice evening my friend.
Gondolf Avatar
April 10, 2018 at 9:48 PM
Thank you, Darlene, I appreciate it. John
Y. Avatar
April 10, 2018 at 4:04 PM
Lol! John, This is hilarious. I could just picture the whole scene. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
Gondolf Avatar
April 10, 2018 at 9:33 PM
Thank you, Alexis, I’m glad you enjoyed it. I appreciated your comments and continued support. John
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 10, 2018 at 3:47 PM
LOL! I love it! ;D
Gondolf Avatar
April 10, 2018 at 9:04 PM
Glad you enjoyed it, Maureen, thanks. John
Allison Avatar
April 10, 2018 at 3:32 PM
Absolutely hilarious John great humour:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Gondolf Avatar
April 10, 2018 at 8:56 PM
Thanks so much, Jan, glad you enjoyed it and thanks for your suggestion. John
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