The Large Blue Swing

It was really a simple thing
Four chains holding a large plank 
Suspended from the ceiling
A big blue swing

Summer at its peak
Heat touching 45 degrees
Cousins all crammed up 
On a large blue swing

Listening to granny’s stories
The distant fan slowly whirring
Laughing and giggling at nothing 
On a large blue swing

Plate in hand my brother would sit at its end
Pretending to drive an airplane
Never knew planes did not have steering
On the large blue swing

Sometimes when no one was around
I’d sit on it with outstretched hands
Barely touching both its ends yet feeling like a queen
On a large blue swing

With my favourite cousin sometimes I’d sit
Munching hot salted peanuts
Pouring out our deepest secrets 
On a large blue swing

At noon in granny’s lap I’d lie
And listen to her lullaby
Soon asleep, without a worry in life
On a large blue swing

Like the swing her hopes never ran high
She spoke to me of days gone by
Looking beautiful, despite a toothless smile
On a large blue swing.

Today it is no more there
With grandma it slowly passed away
But memories still remain 
On the large blue swing.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
May 13, 2013 at 10:55 PM
Returning to this one. I just have to FAVE it.
Dietrich Avatar
July 18, 2011 at 7:14 AM
This was a beautiful memory for you. That is what they are there for, too turn around and write a marvelous poem about them years later!
Culverhouse Avatar
July 11, 2011 at 11:54 PM
Enjoyed reading your memories....so heartwarming!
Poet Avatar
July 11, 2011 at 10:36 AM
Congrats Afroze on your big win...lovely poem.
Hendricks Avatar
July 10, 2011 at 10:17 AM
What a sweet poem. Congratulations on your well-deserved second placement in Paula's contest. Well done, Afroze. :))
Mehta Avatar
July 10, 2011 at 4:50 AM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of Paula,Afroze
Ali Avatar
July 10, 2011 at 8:51 PM
thanks Dr. Ram, I'm sure you have such a swing in your ancestral home. these large swings are called KHATLI and are common in a lot of old Gujrati houses.
George   Avatar
July 10, 2011 at 1:00 AM
Beautiful memories, Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie
Onclaud Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 10:58 PM
how nostalgic, afroze..engrossing... happy thumbs up to you on your stunning win! :) huggs
Onclaud Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 10:57 PM
engrossing... happy thumbs up to you on your stunning win! :) huggs
Brown Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 11:48 AM
Congratulations on your win Ali in Paula's "Childhood Memory" contest. Love, Carol
S. Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 7:19 AM
beautiful poem...sweet childhood memories :)
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