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The Land of Black and the Dark - Act 1

There is a land out there Where the sun will not shine There the black is so dark That would destroy your mind White is not there Because it does not exist Attempts have been many In continual persist On occasions so few Glimmers appeared But the try of the light The black had them speared Darkness abounds In this sightless place Where no one has seen Not even a face Sonar echoes As sound resonates For the want to be light A signal emanates This weak pulse From this darkest of place Is this a cry for light For the black to show face In the mountains of Torridon The year being 2235 A droid called Etto Sensed the black was alive A warrior sat in thought Of a past with his father His mind deep with fraught As his memories gather The signals become frequent Is there a break in the black To turn from the dark The son of Kade, runs with the pack http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/fantasy-14.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/12/2010 3:28:00 PM
Excellent James!!! I really like this! I've just watched an mini episode of a series on sci fy! I enjoyed it. Peace, Audrey
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Date: 3/12/2010 3:04:00 PM
Imaginative and descriptive James.. is it a continuation of one of your other poems? nice suspense and drama too..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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