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The Land of Black and the Dark - Act 1

There is a land out there
Where the sun will not shine
There the black is so dark
That would destroy your mind

White is not there
Because it does not exist
Attempts have been many
In continual persist

On occasions so few
Glimmers appeared
But the try of the light
The black had them speared

Darkness abounds
In this sightless place
Where no one has seen
Not even a face

Sonar echoes
As sound resonates
For the want to be light
A signal emanates

This weak pulse
From this darkest of place
Is this a cry for light
For the black to show face

In the mountains of Torridon
The year being 2235
A droid called Etto
Sensed the black was alive

A warrior sat in thought
Of a past with his father
His mind deep with fraught
As his memories gather

The signals become frequent
Is there a break in the black
To turn from the dark
The son of Kade, runs with the pack




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Date: 3/12/2010 3:28:00 PM
Excellent James!!! I really like this! I've just watched an mini episode of a series on sci fy! I enjoyed it. Peace, Audrey
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Date: 3/12/2010 3:04:00 PM
Imaginative and descriptive James.. is it a continuation of one of your other poems? nice suspense and drama too..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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