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The Lake

sky  serenely   blue 
muteness envelopes the lake
but   for  the  falls  hum


1/7/2015
Contest: Traditional Haiku #2
Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton

Copyright © Grace Mutindi | Year Posted 2015

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

July 9, 2015 at 9:08 AM

Grace, your visualization of the like is magnificent! belated kudos! =)~Olive Eloisa

July 6, 2015 at 12:01 PM

Very beautiful "mountain top experience" haiku that you painted here with words, Grace! Congrats :)

Constance La France

July 6, 2015 at 8:16 AM

Grace, you have penned a visually beautiful haiku, a stunning 7 and thanks for visiting my senryu 13 and congratulations on your placement in the contest

Milton Robertson

July 6, 2015 at 6:53 AM

I can see it now. As for the falls, they are still standing tall. Lovely Grace.

July 3, 2015 at 7:01 PM

ENJOYING THIS ONCE AGAIN... SK

July 6, 2015 at 4:14 AM

...and thanks again for visiting!

July 2, 2015 at 11:24 PM

I can hear it right now. Lovely Haiku, Grace. Well done. Viv x

July 6, 2015 at 3:44 AM

Thanks Viv and well done too!

Andrea Dietrich

July 2, 2015 at 10:33 PM

wow, this is gorgeous. I love it, Grace.

July 6, 2015 at 3:51 AM

Hi Andrea...appreciate your visit!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

July 2, 2015 at 10:25 PM

Wonderful imagery Grace,, congrats on big win!

July 6, 2015 at 3:58 AM

Thanks Dr. Upma!

July 2, 2015 at 7:05 PM

Very nice congrats on you win!

July 6, 2015 at 4:09 AM

Thank you Lee!

July 2, 2015 at 6:09 PM

Nice write, Grace , congratulations on your win a 7. Hugs Eve

July 6, 2015 at 4:11 AM

Thanks a lot Eve...Blessings!

Shadow Hamilton

July 2, 2015 at 6:00 PM

great haiku Grace congrats on 3rd place hugs

July 6, 2015 at 3:47 AM

Hey Hamilton...hugs too!

July 2, 2015 at 5:56 PM

Grace, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win! *SKAT*

July 6, 2015 at 3:46 AM

Hi Skat, thanks!

July 1, 2015 at 10:01 PM

Nice haiku. All the best in the contest. Good day Grace

July 6, 2015 at 4:13 AM

Hi Njeri...thanks for your visit!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

July 1, 2015 at 10:48 AM

Lovely Grace.. =)~Olive Eloisa

July 6, 2015 at 3:42 AM

Hi Eloisa...thanks and be blessed!

July 1, 2015 at 10:04 AM

A beautiful thought. I see it. Blessings to you. :)

July 6, 2015 at 3:41 AM

Blessings to you too carrie!

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