The Lake

sky serenely blue muteness envelopes the lake but for the falls hum 1/7/2015 Contest: Traditional Haiku #2 Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/9/2015 9:08:00 AM

Grace, your visualization of the like is magnificent! belated kudos! =)~Olive Eloisa

Laura Leiser

Date: 7/6/2015 12:01:00 PM

Very beautiful "mountain top experience" haiku that you painted here with words, Grace! Congrats :)

Constance La France

Date: 7/6/2015 8:16:00 AM

Grace, you have penned a visually beautiful haiku, a stunning 7 and thanks for visiting my senryu 13 and congratulations on your placement in the contest

Milton Robertson

Date: 7/6/2015 6:53:00 AM

I can see it now. As for the falls, they are still standing tall. Lovely Grace.

Skat A

Date: 7/3/2015 7:01:00 PM

ENJOYING THIS ONCE AGAIN... SK

Grace Mutindi
Date: 7/6/2015 4:14:00 AM

...and thanks again for visiting!

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/2/2015 11:24:00 PM

I can hear it right now. Lovely Haiku, Grace. Well done. Viv x

Grace Mutindi
Date: 7/6/2015 3:44:00 AM

Thanks Viv and well done too!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/2/2015 10:33:00 PM

wow, this is gorgeous. I love it, Grace.

Grace Mutindi
Date: 7/6/2015 3:51:00 AM

Hi Andrea...appreciate your visit!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/2/2015 10:25:00 PM

Wonderful imagery Grace,, congrats on big win!

Grace Mutindi
Date: 7/6/2015 3:58:00 AM

Thanks Dr. Upma!

Lee Carter

Date: 7/2/2015 7:05:00 PM

Very nice congrats on you win!

Grace Mutindi
Date: 7/6/2015 4:09:00 AM

Thank you Lee!

Eve Roper

Date: 7/2/2015 6:09:00 PM

Nice write, Grace , congratulations on your win a 7. Hugs Eve

Grace Mutindi
Date: 7/6/2015 4:11:00 AM

Thanks a lot Eve...Blessings!

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 7/2/2015 6:00:00 PM

great haiku Grace congrats on 3rd place hugs

Grace Mutindi
Date: 7/6/2015 3:47:00 AM

Hey Hamilton...hugs too!

Skat A

Date: 7/2/2015 5:56:00 PM

Grace, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win! *SKAT*

Grace Mutindi
Date: 7/6/2015 3:46:00 AM

Hi Skat, thanks!

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 7/1/2015 10:01:00 PM

Nice haiku. All the best in the contest. Good day Grace

Grace Mutindi
Date: 7/6/2015 4:13:00 AM

Hi Njeri...thanks for your visit!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/1/2015 10:48:00 AM

Lovely Grace.. =)~Olive Eloisa

Grace Mutindi
Date: 7/6/2015 3:42:00 AM

Hi Eloisa...thanks and be blessed!

Carrie White

Date: 7/1/2015 10:04:00 AM

A beautiful thought. I see it. Blessings to you. :)

Grace Mutindi
Date: 7/6/2015 3:41:00 AM

Blessings to you too carrie!