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THE LADY WHO BATHES IN PUBLIC

THE LADY WHO BATHES IN PUBLIC

               Harlot moon
           Languishes in star bath
                Shamelessly


Victoria Anderson-Throop


the moon last night made me want to repeat this favorite of mine!

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Date: 6/1/2013 4:35:00 PM
love this one, Vic - I'll think of this often x
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Date: 5/21/2013 4:55:00 AM
Having pitifully dabbled in the world of Haiku and Tanka, I am impressed with your post. Your talent is exceptional....Jake
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Date: 5/15/2013 3:25:00 PM
Oh love the image this creates, you sure inspire one with your wonderful short poetry...
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Date: 5/6/2013 12:09:00 AM
I didn't like this one when I read it. But I felt compelled to read it again. And again. And again until I was encompassed in the vision. Now I can say I really like it. Good job. Rockman
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Date: 5/5/2013 12:51:00 PM
Wonderful.....I am faving this one. SuZ
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Date: 5/4/2013 7:43:00 AM
Good one!!
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Date: 5/2/2013 10:26:00 PM
I think that I have read and commented on this this particular haiku, or at least another version of it. Either way, I enjoyed reading it again. The personification of the moon makes for a lovely effect, breathing extra life into the imagery within my mind's eye.
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Victoria Anderson-Throop
Date: 5/3/2013 3:26:00 PM
Yes, as I commented, this is one of my favorite and i thought to repeat it last night, as the moon tried to peek through the May snow storm....glad you like it...it is one of my favorites
Date: 5/2/2013 9:08:00 AM
This was awesome! Tricky little harlot moons!
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Date: 5/2/2013 3:47:00 PM
thanks...i like the imagery and had to share it...glad you liked it! haiku is challenging and delightful when it all falls together.....