The Lady Who Bathes In Public

THE LADY WHO BATHES IN PUBLIC

               Harlot moon
           Languishes in star bath
                Shamelessly


Victoria Anderson-Throop


the moon last night made me want to repeat this favorite of mine!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Horne Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 4:35 PM
love this one, Vic - I'll think of this often x
Posey Avatar
May 21, 2013 at 4:55 AM
Having pitifully dabbled in the world of Haiku and Tanka, I am impressed with your post. Your talent is exceptional....Jake
Horsman Avatar
May 15, 2013 at 3:25 PM
Oh love the image this creates, you sure inspire one with your wonderful short poetry...
Pritts Avatar
May 6, 2013 at 12:09 AM
I didn't like this one when I read it. But I felt compelled to read it again. And again. And again until I was encompassed in the vision. Now I can say I really like it. Good job. Rockman
Delaney Avatar
May 5, 2013 at 12:51 PM
Wonderful.....I am faving this one. SuZ
Poet Avatar
May 4, 2013 at 7:43 AM
Good one!!
Tacito Avatar
May 2, 2013 at 9:08 AM
This was awesome! Tricky little harlot moons!
Anderson-Throop Avatar
May 2, 2013 at 3:47 PM
thanks...i like the imagery and had to share it...glad you liked it! haiku is challenging and delightful when it all falls together.....
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