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The Lady of Shalott, John William Waterhouse

I unchain the caged darkness
to surrender willingly,
taste the warm, wet drips
of liquefied lament and life
tracing the cold cracks
within bruised veins
kissing patiently the searing surge
of anxiety caging and clawing
the pulse of pain-struck peace
the flesh beneath 
the fragility of hope ~
purging the siren’s poison
         of Beelzebub’s breath
love-drunk on dangerous desire
christening the mayhem devotion
carving temples from tempests
as the needles wake me to
a reality romanticized with nails ~

O reaper ... my beloved knight 
aching to seize my light
fool me once more
seduce the stars 
                without a script
lure the lake of night
stripped of pretense 
for I am your eternal flame
this heart, a mausoleum of
cremated calmness
and skeptical skeletons
a panoramic capture
      of insanity unforgiven…

listen as the clouds spill
a thousand secrets
follow the shadow
of me and my truth
watch my skies abandon 
the beautiful lies
I once worshipped ~
as I am now one amongst
the survivors of hearts I broke
while trying not to break,
the ruthless rhythm
of the game of musical chairs;
only the ones 
who ran could chase ~ 
a memory condemned
as the cardinal sin ~ 
an alluring curse 
         damned with
 Lilith’s signature, evermore…
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Crandall Avatar
August 12, 2026 at 2:10 PM
Wow, lots of emotional intensity and vivid imagery - nice interpretation!
Dietrich Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 11:30 PM
Back with big congrats. We both made the list with this artist as our theme
Poet Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 4:55 AM
Your powerful poem explores inner turmoil, desire, and love versus pain, my friend Ink. It depicts a soul trapped in its dark desires with vivid imagery and intense emotions. The poem uses Beelzebub and Lilith to depict the eternal conflict between spiritual yearning and earthly passions. The line "the flesh beneath the fragility of hope" shows a delicate balance of despair and redemption. Hearty congrats on your wonderful podium win; it's a great honor for me to be with you on the same podium. 🌹🌹👏
Kerr Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 1:15 AM
Hi Ink, Congrats on your win with this impeccable work. Inspirational narrative sets the standard.❤️‍🩹🌙 Light and warmth Howard
George Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 12:02 AM
Wow, I missed seeing this poem on the Lady of Shallot, a story I loved from my undergraduate days. Now, with guests at home, I rarely read anyone's poem except of those who comment on my poems. How beautifully and poignantly you have narrated her story who have been under a curse, stuck in her cage and who longed for freedom. Lured by the enchanting figure of a handsome rider, she decides to break the chains, come what may---"as the needles wake me to a reality romanticized with nails ~" The lament that follows is heart breaking.--- "I am now one amongst the survivors of hearts I broke while trying not to break," This is a pity! Though we wish ardently not to break hearts, unwittingly it happens, can't help! The painting of the lady floating in her watery bier is so touching. A wonderful poem, as ever. I am sure, another trophy winner...!❤️👍
Hind Avatar
August 3, 2026 at 10:50 PM
"as the needles wake me to a reality romanticized with nails ~" 🔥 love that
DiMino Avatar
August 3, 2026 at 6:36 AM
"purging the siren’s poison of Beelzebub’s breath love-drunk on dangerous desire" -- what the heck:)) I am only human may fly:)) Great writing my friend. You are a poet's poet.
Dietrich Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 8:36 PM
My gosh. I wrote this long message and then an ad popped up and I lost everything. Anyway, you captured so well the essence of this painting and I love the Lilith reference. This is a fun coincidence. Three night ago I wrote a clerihew for next time Brian put up a contest. And I chose the same artist as the one who painted this picture and I decided on this same picture to enhance my poetry page today!! My little soul niece you are
Kavanagh  Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 1:23 PM
Lilith was once so underrated but is making a huge comeback these days Ink, all thanks to writers like yourself that are unafraid to write their darkest and innermost thoughts; I mean (as the needles wake me to a reality romanticized with nails) that line in particular really hits home, also (as I am now one amongst the survivors of hearts I broke while trying not to break) wow the duality is off the scale, powerfully penned as always, take no prisoners ⚡️and we were both playing musical chairs today, cheers David
Empress Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 2:15 PM
Almost pressed delete accidentally on the comment dear David! Hah’ its still a bit of an uncomfortable subject for some, Lilith. My bestfriend is pagan, and I have no disrespect ~ we are all different. I used her symbolically here, those lines youv quoted are close to my heart. I meant every word. Thank you so much for reading.haha yes its just a beautiful coincidence! 🥳 musical chairs has a deep meaning! As you would know too. Grateful for your visit. Sending you light always Keep inspiring others too to keep it real dear David
Liguori Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 12:45 PM
‘ listen as the clouds spill a thousand secrets’… your poetry is always sprinkled with gems like this. I’m not as eloquent as others understanding your words… but I am and always will be a huge fan of your writing. Nice poem.
Empress Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 12:50 PM
Awwn dear robert haha atleast you understand my sense of humor! Its ok. Its not for everyone the crazy metaphors but I always write in ways you can comprehend for your contests. And also thats my prompt line ~ thank you for being always kind! I am grateful 🥹 💫sending you light ~ 🥸
Gibbons Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 8:14 AM
Hey Ink the genius with words n ink for sur🫶🏼e 🥰 your swimming 🧜‍♀️🧜 in deep depth in this write✍️🐦‍🔥🐦‍🔥🦄💞🎵🎶🎷🪘🎻 im doing this on my phone . Think it should work on your icons on your phone like it does on Instagram? " love-drunk on dangereous desire " explosive love 🔥❤️" seduce the stars without a script " hottt 🔥" listen as the clouds spill a thousand secrets" " watch my skies abandon the beautiful lies " explosive hugsss my friend beautiful interpretation of painting 👀
Empress Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 11:07 AM
🦄🧜‍♀️🐬🌙💫🧚‍♀️🦄🧜‍♀️🦋🫶🏻😻🤧🤟🏼👏🏻🥳🥹
Sharma  Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 7:46 AM
I am Lilith too sometimes ~ or shud I say, seeing the lies and darkness prevailing in the world, we are left with no other option? Sigh . I really love that musical chairs reference here, so true and apt! Isn't it all so similar.. gosh . But you ~ ma fairy goddess, can only smear such soulful and cathartic phrases..🥹🥹😢😭 you've the eye for beauty and your heart writes for a bigger reason n purpose.. that of healing. Sending you light and love always, with mermaid moonbeams and magic!!! A fave, (always) 🌹🌸💞💞✨✨✨
Empress Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 11:04 AM
Awwn haha always ~ yes aww that made me smile 🤧🫠
Sharma  Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 7:41 AM
Oh my world, this is absolutely heartfelt and melancholic in so many ways.. to be in love ~ eluded away in deluded by the dialects , breaking the barriers oh not for the pain, but for the sake of the essence that love is.. strings attached and seduced by the stars. ⭐🌙✨✨ I dun even hv words to describe how this one moved me, ink, "purging the siren’s poison of Beelzebub’s breath" ah those references here and "watch my skies abandon the beautiful lies I once worshipped ~" shud I say I resonate with that alot? 😭😭🌹🌹
Empress Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 11:04 AM
Awwn my angelic star ~ i am touched by your empathetic response… somedays it can be a bit dark for all of us, if we deny feeling that way, I guess we are just liars… lets always keep it real? Hugsz 🫶🏻 🧜‍♀️ 🧚‍♀️ 💫
Bordner Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 7:01 AM
The gravity of this poem can pressurize tears into diamonds Poetess. Disillusionment is no damnation, rather a revelation of the heart's truth. Your heart is a truth of love undying. Your references to Beelzeebub and Lilith are fascinating. The beloved knight reaper is a powerful archtype. One cannot be fooled by love, only kept alive through It. No one in the world feels, and writes like you Ink Empress. You are extraordinary...J.A.B.
Empress Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 10:55 AM
There is no one in the world who feels me like you do dear Justin, thank you for feeling me ~ it gives me comfort, your empathy and ability to grasp little details is impressive and soul warming and accelerates my ink to keep burning 💜😍 Sending you light always 💫 🌙 🫶🏻
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 2:37 AM
Am not as eloquent as Lioness Onpaper, but I see such beauty in your words.🥇💋
Empress Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 2:48 AM
Your words I do feel them dear Alison, thank you so very much for being kind 🌸✍️
Cunningham Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 2:31 AM
Love your interpretation of the painting IE, you really go in deep and have an unmatched talent for doing so. Tennyson would be proud of it. Hope your weekend is going well. Tom🌹
Empress Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 2:46 AM
I read his poem, little bit, dear Tom, which inspired this artpiece, and Now I here I am inspired too. Its such a deep story. One that resonates too. I am so grateful always for your kind support... thank you so much for being here. 🙌🕊️✨
Onpaper Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 12:46 AM
purging the siren’s poison of Beelzebub’s breath love-drunk on dangerous desire…mmmmm the intensity of the demonic love papi!!! fool me once more seduce the stars without a script… with the kundhalini by ur side … never shall u be fooled papi… I am your eternal flame.. yes u r !!! 🕊️🔥🔥… watch my skies abandon the beautiful lies I once worshipped .:: no … I refuse watch!!! I close my eyes for this!!! My love is pureeee! No lie! an alluring curse damned with Lilith’s signature, mmmm … this piece.. is taking my breath away …my love for u will on strrrrrrong u sexaaaaay slice of heaven with a kundhalini cherry on top 🌙👀
Onpaper Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 12:55 AM
Our needs and wants never align …. MJ made songs abt it ..my delulu resembles to this … Ani r u ok … ani r u ok .. ani r u ok .. can u tell us … r u ok … 😂.. ok maybeI need help .. 🤔
Empress Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 12:50 AM
You are delulu u need love injection like me ~ im awake👀
Onpaper Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 12:49 AM
Heloooo … I am Gabriel!!!! I willl churn and turn lands upside down for the name love !!! 🌙
Empress Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 12:47 AM
If only you were my reaper papi! 😂😂😂😭😭
G  Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 12:15 AM
Wow this is perfect! I completely pictured this as something within a book for sale, stocked by galleries and completely immersive! Excellent!
G  Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 1:44 AM
Nipped back to fave 🥳
Empress Avatar
August 2, 2026 at 12:19 AM
Welcome to the madhouse Mi lady Laurentine, Even when I am dying, I will be writing ~ this is proof 😭😂👀 omg you are here! 🥰 i need to learn how to copy paste more emojis
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