The Ladder

I
Had
Once
Wrote  
That   I
Climbed
A  ladder.
With  each
Step up, the
Rungs turned
Into  tree  limbs
Made for squirrels.
My  sprightly  arms
And legs transformed
Into wrought iron wings.
I perched to take to the air
Like  the glorious albatross,
But the weight tugged and
Thwarted a  new freedom
From the physical world.
I’m  only a nonfictional
Descendant from man,
Descending a ladder
One actual rung at
A time.  With no
Help, alas from
A  premature
Fantasy that
Will make
Me want
To keep
Going
Up.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 12/16/2013 8:57:00 PM
Hi David, life always presents us with many uphill climbs, and yes, we must continue upward, Nice structure very fitting for the title. Blessings, Carl
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Date: 12/15/2013 11:56:00 AM
we never know if we are ready unless we try, no matter how heavy the burden
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Date: 12/15/2013 12:41:00 AM
Very interesting poem, but the shape???? ummmmmmm....Is it just me or is that really what I see? CURIOUS!!! Great job. Love the mention of albatross. Beautiful
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Date: 12/15/2013 9:55:00 AM
Thanks for your comments. I agree on the shape issue, but I picked it out of default. A Ninette would be perfect, but only nine lines. I wonder if there is a form out there with increasing/decreasing lines?
Date: 12/14/2013 9:17:00 PM
oh my , now this one is CLEVER and so is its message!! one of the best I have seen tonight!!
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