The Kissing Loop

"The Kissing Loop"
My eyes close to keep you there in a dream slow dancing, bow and cello we waltz in air bending you closer into my body like this pea soup fog embracing me I walk quiet streets surrounded by Mountains of Blue the fat bellied pregnant clouds deliver a life that is verdant, that is new a new day is born through some kind of Light storm grey mist in a teacup of a town I am walking in the clouds this could be some kind of heaven high up in my beautiful kingdom free as a bird gliding silently down quiet streets besieged by beguiling story unfurling in forests of blues lavenders and greens train departs at 3 train departs at 3 Blue Highway at the Cross Roads Where time is easy, fresh air to breathe The record in my mind that plays over grooves cracked for a thousand and more days where the kissing loop repeats it’s mission repeats it’s mission some kind of erudite Sanskrit, like kissing walls Aramaic, another foreign language but you’ll hear the message if you quiet your mind and your heart listens Love is in every step taken One step forward 3 step back The Kissing Loop that’s been playing it’s oneiric "Blue Highway at the Cross Roads" is right on track train departs at 3 train departs at 3 and here stands me New Page: Some Beautiful Story (Lovejoy-Burton/August 2018)
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Date: 11/5/2019 6:12:00 AM
I'm transported to your mind, floating as you are submerged neck deep, a kiss is more than just a kiss
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Date: 11/7/2019 5:27:00 AM
https://youtu.be/8N-qO3sPMjc
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 11/7/2019 3:17:00 AM
written in the Blue Mountains, NSW, in a small township covered in low lying cloud like a Pea Soup fog, very magical - walking through actual clouds.
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 11/7/2019 3:16:00 AM
https://youtu.be/7fdAFmtq-o8
Date: 10/9/2018 9:47:00 AM
hi LLB, it is Beautiful expressions of dream. Dreams have special meaning and they reflect the future of your life. Hope you progress in life as your dream is guiding you to a journey of progress upwards
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 10/9/2018 2:43:00 PM
Thank you Imtiaz. It is a very beautiful place, especially in Winter, when the mist and cloud cover descend over the mountains. When you walk the streets in that mist, it is magical. It could be where I am heading. x
Date: 8/30/2018 3:06:00 PM
Beautiful, Leanne. Yes, sometimes dreams do come true. I hope yours last till eternity...love the pics you included. My favorite kind of scenery...Nice to see you back...Charlie :)
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 8/30/2018 3:27:00 PM
Beautiful place that truly is freedom. Thank you Charlie.x
Date: 8/29/2018 8:28:00 PM
Nice one
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 8/29/2018 8:58:00 PM
:) Thank you.
Date: 8/29/2018 9:24:00 AM
Your poetic words take us on a journey of mind...very mystical, Leanne...love & light...^WW^
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 8/29/2018 3:10:00 PM
This is what I am thinking as each day progresses. We are all on the journey in this book. The book is titled, "Life" and each of us is a chapter full of endless pages constructed of sub-plots and outcomes. The plot of the story is All Roads Lead Home and every character is known in a round about way by 6 Degrees of Separation. Light and Love to you Angel Warrior, thanks for reading one of the pages in my chapter.
Date: 8/28/2018 11:12:00 AM
Fantastic...A true artist thou art...Lovely to read you grow so beautifully...All the best my friend
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 8/28/2018 11:14:00 AM
too kind Arturo. x It is a beautiful story unfolding at the right pace, through a dream. Sometimes dreams do come true. Thank you.
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