The Kiss

The ultimate kiss starts soon, anticipation rises
Passion does alleviate all inhibitions within the soul
The romantic kiss, brushed softly across quivering lips

Russell Sivey

Entrant into Tracie ~*~ Indigo Dreamweaver's "Sijo Kisses" contest

1/30/2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Pettit Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 9:37 PM
Now that's a way to describe a kiss! Good writing Russell.
Puddifoot Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 4:52 PM
and this is the ultimate romantic poem! anticipating a win for this one in the contest...
Johnson Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 4:30 PM
pretty hot stuff mate, burn ya fingers in this state...orright mate...
Williams Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 4:31 AM
Russ, there are kisses flying all over the place at the moment, great entry, good luck..David
Onclaud Avatar
January 30, 2012 at 7:47 PM
ohhh, it;s getting heated here... remarkable sway of " quivering"images, russell... a sure winner for me!.:) huggs
Kendrick Avatar
January 30, 2012 at 4:15 PM
Very passionate work here..Enjoyed reading this eve..Reads like a winner for the contest..Sara
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