The Kiss

The ultimate kiss starts soon, anticipation rises Passion does alleviate all inhibitions within the soul The romantic kiss, brushed softly across quivering lips Russell Sivey Entrant into Tracie ~*~ Indigo Dreamweaver's "Sijo Kisses" contest 1/30/2012

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Robert Pettit

Date: 1/31/2012 9:37:00 PM

Now that's a way to describe a kiss! Good writing Russell.

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 1/31/2012 4:52:00 PM

and this is the ultimate romantic poem! anticipating a win for this one in the contest...

Don Johnson

Date: 1/31/2012 4:30:00 PM

pretty hot stuff mate, burn ya fingers in this state...orright mate...

David Williams

Date: 1/31/2012 4:31:00 AM

Russ, there are kisses flying all over the place at the moment, great entry, good luck..David

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/30/2012 7:47:00 PM

ohhh, it;s getting heated here... remarkable sway of " quivering"images, russell... a sure winner for me!.:) huggs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/30/2012 4:15:00 PM

Very passionate work here..Enjoyed reading this eve..Reads like a winner for the contest..Sara