The Kiss

You kissed me I surrendered It was involuntary The seed was planted It grew. It blossomed Passion abounds ~Rick Berry

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/22/2012 5:11:00 PM

Rick, congratulation with your featured poem of the week. God Bless, you and your family during the holidays,, always~ PD

Fisayo Aderounmu

Date: 11/22/2012 10:56:00 AM

Rick, cute but firm i luv d verse. Kindly look up my poem 'kiss'.

Maggie Mae Mcafee

Date: 5/4/2011 11:00:00 PM

Rick, you do have a way of exprssing yourself...look forward to reading more..

Dinda Minardi

Date: 5/3/2011 6:58:00 AM

Simple yet sweet.

Emma Mantle

Date: 5/3/2011 12:43:00 AM

Stunning piece. This conveys so much. I think this will have to go on my fav list! Best wishes Em :)