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The Kiss

Melanie: Why would you want to marry me for, anyhow?
Jake: So I can kiss you anytime I want.

Sweet Home Alabama

THE KISS

See Rodin’s sculpture, sumptuous or a stiff on the shelf.
I have to inquire about the development of their hot lips.
Oh have I a story to tell the young - one about myself,
the happenstance as our nuptial sun and moon eclipse.

We avow in front of witnesses at the Beach’s square.
Behind our backs, windows speaking,   “Don’t do it!”
The prisoners wear black and white stripes, bars stare,
still they believe in forever after, happily or despite it.

The Kiss, romantic bliss, a formidable honeymoon thrill.
Two bodies encapsulated into one pill, happy or bitter.
Naked for all to see, plastered over the waves, his will
of handsy regret or not, inspire of modern day twitter.

I’m in my wedding-white gown, contrast of a shotgun —
Dad’s not trying to marry me off and I’m not from the hills.
Regardless, the cake and wine awaits in the Virginia sun.
I repeat the words from the Justice of the peace, the untils.

An eventual kiss in sight…oh what Rodin has in mind!
Would he be proud of my dad, when my espoused asked,
“Can I trust her to drive?” …the response, curt and unkind,
“I don’t know. I trusted her when she left.” Dad unmasked.

My to-be wears his Navy cap, concealing his eyes.
Terrified that my parents had arrived and their camper.
Side-by-side sister-in-laws, sizing them up would be wise.
In what possible way could Rodin create mischief…tamper?

The moment arrived…. “You may kiss the bride.”
The jailbirds whistled and their hand claps echoed.
Between the eclipse of the sun and the moon, it’s slide,
vibrations of laughter we would carry over the threshold.

1/4/2022
Contest: FUNNY MEMORIES
Sponsor: Natasha L Scragg
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Allison Avatar
January 31, 2022 at 4:03 PM
thanks for the smile Kim:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
January 31, 2022 at 5:14 PM
Thank you so much! Glad you are smiling!
Goldsmith Avatar
January 29, 2022 at 11:59 AM
Congratulations on your win. A fun write. Great memories are the best. Wedding days are always a surprise. Have a blessed day/weekend...................
Rodrigues Avatar
January 29, 2022 at 6:15 PM
Thank you, Paula! Enjoyed the contest. Blessings to you too!
Mcintosh Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 3:37 AM
So adorable. I love it. God bless you with a win. Love it. Love, Gina
Rodrigues Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 6:05 AM
Thank you, Gina!
Wolf Avatar
January 4, 2022 at 4:54 PM
Funny and interesting, this contrast of the humorous and the classic, all wrapped up in your wedding ceremony. Keep on Kissing! :) gw
Rodrigues Avatar
January 4, 2022 at 5:27 PM
Thanks…lol!
Ball Avatar
January 4, 2022 at 2:31 PM
One never forgets the wedding day. Well done Kim. God Bless, JB
Rodrigues Avatar
January 4, 2022 at 2:42 PM
This is true…unforgettable! Thank you :)
Pandit Avatar
January 4, 2022 at 12:52 PM
I hear the joy of that moment still resonating in your words, Kim. Nice to cherish such wonderful memories. A story that will speak for a lifetime.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 4, 2022 at 2:31 PM
Thank you, Vijay! I appreciate you!
Buehler Avatar
January 4, 2022 at 12:18 PM
Loved the sun and moon eclipse, Kim. Excellent writing! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
January 4, 2022 at 2:32 PM
Thank you, sweet Evelyn!
Goff Avatar
January 4, 2022 at 12:02 PM
Awesome!!! Kim! And congrats on 3 poems in Anthology!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 4, 2022 at 2:32 PM
Thank you so much! Excited about the anthology!
Romios Avatar
January 4, 2022 at 10:22 AM
Best wishes.. PR
Rodrigues Avatar
January 4, 2022 at 2:32 PM
Thanks, Pangie!
DiMino Avatar
January 4, 2022 at 8:45 AM
"Two bodies encapsulated into one pill", love that:) A delight to read of your nuptial interpretation and experience. And they live happily ever after, I like to think I can add. Joe.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 4, 2022 at 2:33 PM
As in a lifetime of memories, kids, grands, grand adventures and warmth of love! Thanks, Joe!
Buhagiar Avatar
January 4, 2022 at 8:41 AM
Funny memories indeed. May you have a happy and healthy New Year. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 4, 2022 at 2:34 PM
Same to you dear friend! Thank you! ~ hugs
Cunningham Avatar
January 4, 2022 at 8:09 AM
Happy memories Kim, bet it only seems like yesterday. Hope your new year is off to a good start. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
January 4, 2022 at 2:35 PM
No, its a lifetime away…we were practically kids ;) Thank you, Tom!
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