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eagerly waiting his turn
pacing in the lineup
planned his strategy
his heart thumping
got to the kissing booth
puckered up his best pucker
for her lips so tender
he couldn’t resist
offered to pay double
for his guilty nibble



AP: 2nd place 2020

Submitted on December 22, 2019 for contest KISSING CONTEST sponsored by BOBBY MAY  -  RANKED 5TH

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 1/12/2020 4:10:00 PM
so cute, I am just reviewing some of your latest poetry!
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Date: 1/12/2020 5:35:00 PM
LOL Thanks, Andrea.
Date: 12/26/2019 9:40:00 AM
Congrats on your win Line, Happy Holidays, best wishes for the New Year..
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Date: 12/26/2019 10:00:00 PM
Thanks, Joseph. Most appreciated.
Date: 12/26/2019 2:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your very passionate descriptive win! Hugs Eve
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/26/2019 10:01:00 PM
Thanks, Eve. Most appreciated.
Date: 12/25/2019 1:26:00 PM
- Congratulations on your lovely winning poem, Line :) - hugs and Marry Christmas // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/26/2019 10:01:00 PM
Thanks, Sunshine. Most appreciated.
Date: 12/24/2019 6:08:00 PM
Line congrats on the placement!;)
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Date: 12/24/2019 10:45:00 PM
Thanks, Brenda. Most appreciated.
Date: 12/24/2019 3:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement! I have never been to a kissing booth, lol great job my sweet friend!
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Date: 12/24/2019 3:10:00 PM
LOL - aka germ booth ! Thanks for sponsoring this fun contest, Bobby.
Date: 12/22/2019 1:30:00 PM
Hi Lin. nice one. Cant say I would attempt this feat. Only my lips our for just 1. :)~
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/22/2019 1:59:00 PM
Frankly it's hard to believe kissing booths were ever a thing... or maybe it was just in the Betty & Veronica comics. LOL
Date: 12/22/2019 10:59:00 AM
oh he got carried away.. nice poem for the contest..
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/22/2019 12:57:00 PM
Thanks, SO. Much appreciated.
Date: 12/22/2019 10:56:00 AM
This is darling! I could see it clearly, Line.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/22/2019 12:58:00 PM
Thanks, Caren. Much appreciated.
Date: 12/22/2019 10:23:00 AM
Heh! Chuckles out loud! Love it ;D, My best to you in the contest Line, xomo!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/22/2019 12:58:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Maureen.

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