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The Kiss

eagerly waiting his turn
pacing in the lineup
planned his strategy
his heart thumping

got to the kissing booth
puckered up his best pucker
for her lips so tender

he couldn’t resist
offered to pay double
for his guilty nibble



AP: 2nd place 2020

Submitted on December 22, 2019 for contest KISSING CONTEST sponsored by BOBBY MAY  -  RANKED 5TH
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Dietrich Avatar
January 12, 2020 at 4:10 PM
so cute, I am just reviewing some of your latest poetry!
Gauthier Avatar
January 12, 2020 at 5:35 PM
LOL Thanks, Andrea.
May Avatar
December 26, 2019 at 9:40 AM
Congrats on your win Line, Happy Holidays, best wishes for the New Year..
Gauthier Avatar
December 26, 2019 at 10:00 PM
Thanks, Joseph. Most appreciated.
Roper Avatar
December 26, 2019 at 2:42 AM
Congratulations on your very passionate descriptive win! Hugs Eve
Gauthier Avatar
December 26, 2019 at 10:01 PM
Thanks, Eve. Most appreciated.
Andresen Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 1:26 PM
- Congratulations on your lovely winning poem, Line :) - hugs and Marry Christmas // Anne-Lise :)
Gauthier Avatar
December 26, 2019 at 10:01 PM
Thanks, Sunshine. Most appreciated.
Chiri Avatar
December 24, 2019 at 6:08 PM
Line congrats on the placement!;)
Gauthier Avatar
December 24, 2019 at 10:45 PM
Thanks, Brenda. Most appreciated.
May Avatar
December 24, 2019 at 3:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement! I have never been to a kissing booth, lol great job my sweet friend!
Gauthier Avatar
December 24, 2019 at 3:10 PM
LOL - aka germ booth ! Thanks for sponsoring this fun contest, Bobby.
Na Avatar
December 22, 2019 at 1:30 PM
Hi Lin. nice one. Cant say I would attempt this feat. Only my lips our for just 1. :)~
Gauthier Avatar
December 22, 2019 at 1:59 PM
Frankly it's hard to believe kissing booths were ever a thing... or maybe it was just in the Betty & Veronica comics. LOL
One Avatar
December 22, 2019 at 10:59 AM
oh he got carried away.. nice poem for the contest..
Gauthier Avatar
December 22, 2019 at 12:57 PM
Thanks, SO. Much appreciated.
Krutsinger Avatar
December 22, 2019 at 10:56 AM
This is darling! I could see it clearly, Line.
Gauthier Avatar
December 22, 2019 at 12:58 PM
Thanks, Caren. Much appreciated.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 22, 2019 at 10:23 AM
Heh! Chuckles out loud! Love it ;D, My best to you in the contest Line, xomo!
Gauthier Avatar
December 22, 2019 at 12:58 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Maureen.
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