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The Kingfisher

I remember I got up earlier than usual A bright summer morning with no one around I crossed the road onto the country path And made my way along Past the farmer’s reservoir
Through the long grass of a fallow field And over the stile I came to a little hamlet without a name Not much to speak of A handful of thatched cottages With a narrow stream beside
Down in the water Long fronds of weed glistened And then, so quick I almost didn’t see it, A flash of iridescence So intense in the summer light Like a jewel hovering
It flew off quickly I strained to see it Looping along As if following bunting down the stream My first kingfisher!

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Date: 9/23/2023 6:36:00 AM
This is a beautiful, delightful poem Diane. So well written and you have described such a wonderful scene, ‘ long grass of a fallow field’, ‘ a little hamlet without a name ‘ ‘weed glistened’. Sounds like a perfect outing. Lovely imagery. So enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing :)
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Diane Leggett
Date: 9/23/2023 9:44:00 AM
Thank you Christina for your lovely comments!
Date: 9/20/2023 12:50:00 AM
A lovely poem. Well done.
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Diane Leggett
Date: 9/20/2023 1:51:00 AM
Thanks Jeanette!

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