The kind I like

I've said it loud and clear last year this day,
how many people need to hear me say,
the kind of man I need,
is the one who can lead,
my starved limbs far from a chocolate tray.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Canerdy Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 7:11 PM
Good one! CONGRATS. Janice
Dietrich Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 3:14 PM
wow, another awesome one. Great winner list we are on. Congrats for your big win
Fowler Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 10:07 AM
LOL Very cute. Congratulations! :)
Kitchin Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 6:04 AM
Lioness, congratulations on your first place win with your cute and clever limerick!
Onpaper Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 6:54 AM
Thank you soo much <3
Rodgers Avatar
January 25, 2024 at 6:25 AM
Good Morning, Lioness, I laughed and laughed. My wife is such a chocoholic, and I am more of a savory kind of guy who loves potato chips. Thanks for such charming words. - Blessings, Daniel
One Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 11:07 AM
hahaha.. what man can ever do that??? what about Magnum? I buy my boo lots of chocolate, she loves it, but she gets worried she might get fat, I tell her I would love her even if she was a round as a hot air balloon... :))) You need full stop at end of last sentence not comma..
Empress Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 11:58 AM
They always say that and leave if we gain weight. Lolol your comment made me laugh
Onpaper Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 11:14 AM
Hahaha … thank u for the heads up brotha .. yea magnum also same family of chocolates .. i need restrictions XD
Empress Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 10:34 AM
Lolol well well, thats the kind of man i dread, hahah i laughed so much reading this! I need my man to let me rule in my castle of chocolates! Why lead you! You lead him papi! You got this all wrong! No wonder. You need to change your mantra this year! Ill teach u lolol best wishes for the contest
One Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 11:12 AM
oh no Ink died :(
Empress Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 10:49 AM
Hhhahahahah m dead
Onpaper Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 10:47 AM
Yeeeesssss exactly… I wanna know what wearing a tuutuu feels like … to feel the wind on my thighs XD… hahahha …. Diet still goin strong papi
Empress Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 10:44 AM
Hahahaha you wanna wear fluffy skirts and twirl? Lol papi! You want fairytales fine! But yes chocolate diet it is this year :D
Onpaper Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 10:41 AM
Ayoooo papi… I tried the leading … too tired of wearing the pants in the relationship aeee … n now I need to be lead la… cannot ..this chocolate giving stress to my imaginary cholesterol issues aeee … but till I meet the fella I shall castle of chocolates with u aeee… 2024 chocolate diet with u
Allison Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 10:31 AM
ha ha ha if you find one who is still alive after denying a woman chocolate do let us know lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Allison Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 10:36 AM
Not if he's like an ex boyfriend I had - I was lucky if I saw the chocolate as he was a chocohlic lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Onpaper Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 10:34 AM
Yess .. that’s the challenge.. men like to spoil their women
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