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The Kill

Motionless the leopard waits only an odd flick of his tail giving away where he hides He is watching the small dikdik patiently he waits as slowly they come closer as they graze Coiled up ready to spring with a flurry of speed he ambushes his prey A squeal and the deed done he carries off his dinner taking it high up into the tree Stashing it between forked branches safe from hyenas and lions he eats at his leisure

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/29/2013 9:18:00 AM
Great descriptive verse gives the poem power and motion. Well done
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Date: 10/30/2013 6:12:00 AM
hi Karen much appreciate your feedback TY for your valuable time Shadow x smile
Date: 10/27/2013 9:12:00 PM
You capture this so well.
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Date: 10/30/2013 6:13:00 AM
Hi Rick and Ty dear it is an awesome sight hugs Shadow x smile
Date: 10/27/2013 5:51:00 PM
you captuured the hunt well ....nicely penned Shadow....I am amazed at how strong this cat is....
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Date: 10/29/2013 6:16:00 AM
Yes Joseph their bite can crush their prey's skull incredible power. Ty for enjoying Shadow x smile
Date: 10/27/2013 5:38:00 PM
A total picture of ambushing of prey by the leopard beautifully adorned with the ink of natural colors. Enjoyed the scene. Loved always, my friend, bl
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Date: 10/29/2013 6:15:00 AM
Hi Bl so nice of you Ty Shadow x smile
Date: 10/27/2013 1:06:00 PM
well crafted write here, my friend
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Date: 10/27/2013 3:49:00 PM
hi Jack so pleased that you enjoyed it. Ty for reading Shadow x smile
Date: 10/26/2013 6:58:00 PM
nicely penned Shadow...I could see him waiting for the right moment...enjoyed this one :) hugs
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Date: 10/27/2013 3:50:00 PM
hi Sandra trust all is well Ty for your review Shadow x smile
Date: 10/26/2013 2:56:00 PM
- Like a black shadow .... never know when it strikes. - Proficient written Shadow! - I like it very much. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/26/2013 3:08:00 PM
Black leopards are awesome Anne Lise such graceful cats ty for your precious time have a lovely weekend Shadow x smile

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