The Kid With the Twitch

Though his name I’ve forgotten, I’m now thinking of
a guy from my junior high days who was cursed
with the kind of a face just a mother would love,
black glasses, and acne, but that’s not the worst.

Each day in my art class, the table at which
I sat had me facing across from that guy.
Sometimes he would “spaz out” because he would twitch.
I’d try not to look the poor kid in the eye.

His face would contort and his arms kind of flail.
All the kids at our table would try not to stare.
If I had his condition, to God I would wail:
Why me, Lord, oh why? This is too much to bear!

We never could know when his twitching would start,
but it happened a lot, and the students in class
never uttered a word. Bless every kid’s heart
for minding their manners and not being crass.

We never said much to the poor twitching boy.
We were all very young still and hadn’t a clue.
I think of him now. Did he find his own joy?
I think I’d have been very glum in his shoes.

To have to contend with a twitch all one’s life.
I can’t comprehend how he made it a go.
Did he end up like most – with a job and a wife?
Fate seems harsh to such kids that we don’t get to know.

Oct. 27, 2019
for Nina Parmenter's Itch, Witch, Glitch Or Twitch Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 25, 2019 at 11:32 AM
Very introspective, and compassionate muse, AD ... your loving spirit shines! Aurora bright poetry. Love and peace forever.
Macfarlane Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 5:56 AM
Not a nice fate to have indeed. I hope he found some type of medication to help him as he got older. Terrific write....good luck in the contest. Hugs
Godwin Avatar
October 31, 2019 at 4:54 PM
Is this true? It reminds me of the deaf girl in the 7th grade who I should have befriended instead of avoiding. During the Pledge of Allegiance her hand was always cupping her breast - innocently, but still cupping. My entry for Nina is probably too Dr. Seuss-ish (but I kept the beat) and this is touching as well as relevant to those young years when we're not sure what to do with 'different.' Love ya ... CayCay
Dietrich Avatar
October 31, 2019 at 9:12 PM
yes, sweetie, it's true. I have a better poem somewhere called Rare Birds. One such fellow was Barklay who all the kids bullied. I walked him home from Jr. high a few times. FElt sorry for him and how he came from a bad home.
Krutsinger Avatar
October 31, 2019 at 9:53 AM
Children are often the first to show us the most human way to be " Bless every kid’s heart for minding their manners and not being crass. " This poem reminds us of that.
Anish Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 9:19 PM
You tell a sad tale here. But there is hope! I just voted for a Public Advocate candidate who has Turret's Syndrome. It looks like he might win! Touching poem here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Dietrich Avatar
October 31, 2019 at 9:12 PM
I bet he had something like that and maybe with new meds that came out later, he could function better.
Adams Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 9:13 PM
so sad...i see this kind of thing often because of my job...great write for the contest and best wishes my friend :) hugs
Romios Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 1:28 PM
Delightful piece, Andrea PR
Mcferran Avatar
October 28, 2019 at 11:13 PM
This is so compassionately penned... it really makes you feel for the kid! Terrific take on the contest! ;)
Horn Avatar
October 28, 2019 at 5:08 PM
like looking at lake, while water want to be in, when we splash around. Miss seeing your comments. Do you have any more trips planned?
Faulkner Avatar
October 28, 2019 at 2:06 PM
Interesting the impact something like that can have on a kid, or anyone - I hope he found some medical treatment that might have helped-
Ball Avatar
October 28, 2019 at 11:06 AM
What a sad story but a good entry for the contest. Good luck my friend. God Bless, JB
Neumann Avatar
October 28, 2019 at 10:50 AM
I like this. Great stuff. Kind wishes, Kai
Y. Avatar
October 28, 2019 at 8:44 AM
WoW! Andrea, This is a good entry for the contest theme. Is this a true story? If so, I feel sorry for the kid in your story. I'm happy to hear that his classmates didn't make fun of him. I could just picture the whole scene. Well done. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Have a great day my friend:-) Alexis
Dietrich Avatar
October 28, 2019 at 8:49 AM
yes, it's a real story. My memory is foggy, but I don't think people made fun of him, like they would in today's world I suppose. I'll never forget how he looked. I felt so sorry for him.
Pandit Avatar
October 28, 2019 at 5:37 AM
WOW! You took this contest into a potent theme, Andrea. A touching story you wrote.. and I wonder as well how he coped later in life. A powerful write!
Cunningham Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 11:07 PM
Well written Andrea, we have to count our blessings sometimes. Good luck. Tom
Mcintosh Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 10:12 PM
A wonderful entry for her contest, Andrea. A story within a poem told very well indeed. Blessings to you always, Gina
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace