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'the Keys'

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Gert W. Knop

Date: 1/9/2011 8:09:00 AM

Your lines are pure music, Wilma! Geniet jou lyne om te lees dit dof Sondag middag...Gert:)

Joe Maverick

Date: 1/8/2011 10:36:00 AM

really enjoyed Wilma.

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/8/2011 10:01:00 AM

An excellent entry my dear poet lady...And yes your comment made me smile as all always they do... hope your enjoying your Sat. with love across this big pond to you always Michael

James Peranteau

Date: 1/8/2011 6:11:00 AM

This rocks Wilma dear poet ! I have read many of the Crystallines this a.m...and this one I must say really has that punch ! Great write ! much love, james

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/7/2011 11:09:00 PM

the competition just gets better, love this Wilma. Harry

The Situation

Date: 1/7/2011 10:37:00 PM

and with it the song emloyed. T,S.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/7/2011 10:29:00 PM

Awesome, Wilma. Have you read all the entries so far? geeez, they are mostly really good ones. I would hate to be the judge!! LUv, Andrea

Kash Poet

Date: 1/7/2011 6:56:00 PM

What a beautiful crystalline you have penned Wilma!I appreciate it--goodluck in the contest!

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 1/7/2011 5:09:00 PM

interesting write!! Hope you are well.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/7/2011 4:57:00 PM

A total package in your lines Wilma with a perfect title luv... enhancing the Crystalline completely.. good luck in Rick's contest ..so mesmerizing.. happy weekend my dear friend..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/7/2011 3:27:00 PM

This one has the revererations to be in the winners' circle for sure..Good luck..Your review of my work brought sunshine into my dreary life..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/7/2011 2:51:00 PM

Wonderful images to express thought the keys of the piano, Wilma

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/7/2011 1:09:00 PM

You describe the beauty of the piano's notes so well, Wilma. Did you ever hear the Paul McCartney/Stevie Wonder song "Ebony and Ivory." The first two lines would have made a great 17-syllable crystalline: "Ebony and ivory live together in perfect harmony." Love your crystalline and wish you success in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/7/2011 12:24:00 PM

Fantastic, Wilma! Hope you had a great day and wishing you a wonderful weekend! Love, Audrey