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The Keeper of Secrets

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I am the Keeper of Secrets I have heard all men's tales Of murder, adultery And other betrayals Their stories come to me Through back doors at night Their compromised souls Caught in desperate plight I'm the Keeper of Secrets You never would know I make no judgments No cursings of woe I hear both sides of stories Only one thing is sure That both sides are liars No one speaks the truth.

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Emmanuel Liadi

Date: 12/5/2021 2:51:00 AM

Ataboy! This a good, nice and simple write up. This write up has revealed that there are two sides to a story and why people do things be it good or bad. But the end of this poem is surprising. Lmao! Who is actually telling the truth?

Carol Louise Moon

Date: 11/16/2021 7:48:00 PM

Wow, DC, nice surprise ending here! Good rhyme and meter, too. We'll done.

Daniel Schack

Date: 11/15/2021 11:44:00 PM

It may be that there are more evil people than not.makes one love the good ones so much more because of their rarity.please read and,or comment on my poems.peace.

Daniel Schack

Date: 11/15/2021 11:43:00 PM

It may be that there are more evil people than not.makes one love the good ones so much more because of their rarity.please read and,or comment on my poems.peace.

Daniel Schack

Date: 11/15/2021 11:42:00 PM

It may be that there are more evil people than not.makes one love the good ones so much more because if their rarity.please read and,or comment on my poems.peace.

Bill Baker

Date: 11/15/2021 4:17:00 PM

I liked your Monologue, "The Keeper Of Secrets". I thought it was a priest until he heard both sides. I would agree with you that all people lie. Even the purest lie to themselves. Thanks for sharing your Monologue. Bill

Poet Tellaferro

Date: 11/11/2021 12:16:00 PM

Damn! Tight! Love IT! Inspiring!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/6/2016 1:48:00 AM

DC Jordan, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

D. C. Jordan
Date: 8/6/2016 6:22:00 AM

Thanks Linda, I will do that.

Tim Smith

Date: 8/5/2016 2:39:00 PM

Very good Don...welcome to the soup

D. C. Jordan
Date: 8/5/2016 3:04:00 PM

Thank you Tim

Skat A

Date: 8/3/2016 7:33:00 PM

D.C. Jordan, , Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**

D. C. Jordan
Date: 8/3/2016 9:14:00 PM

Thank you SKAT, it's a pleasure to be here. I discovered PoetrySoup when I was looking up Emily Dickinson and then discovered all the site has to offer. It's an honor to be able to present my work with so many other accomplished writers.

Indiana Shaw

Date: 8/3/2016 5:17:00 PM

A brilliant piece of work - cleverly done . . . : )

D. C. Jordan
Date: 8/3/2016 9:16:00 PM

Thanks Indiana Shaw, I wrote this many years ago, rediscovered it, dusted it off, polished it up, you know :)