The Keening

The Keening

Disconsolate depressions on the valley floor of green
With bodies bent and keening, young girls and their kind
Take to the dead fields down, to fall upon their knees
Scattered, sickly tombstones, laid flat on mud and grass
Hearts broken on the sorrow, nothing more
War leaves desolation in a lingering stench of death
Surroundings void of life but drenched in blood  
Despair is in the futures of the mourning maidens
After the fight a second conflict brews, the eerie wailing
Malignant, so many hard tears flood in trembling streams
Down, already in the valley, to join the others
In rattling fear the young girls touch each cheek
Of their men, their loved ones, cold and dead
Grotesquely somber faces sink to morbid depths
As reality sets in, not on their side
A formidable enemy, despair is clearly there
The living reminded forever of the cost of life
Crushed, consumed in hellatious fear that never ends
Their loved ones will never love again
Slaughtered, butchered, wasted on the ground
They sink with deep nausea, ugly as the blackened rocks about
Perverted on the landscape, the dead stay in their place
No more warmth of life to fill their needs 
The women weep in competition with the rain in torment
Old ladies place coarse blankets on the raw dead men
Too much pain fills their fragile grieving veins  
They sing the keening song to praise their dead
Keening continues on the wind and in the rain
It will never stop, never end, always the same
Disconsolate depressions on the valley floor of green
Wailing with great agony and screams

Entered -12/05/14   
Poetry Contest Name - Death Shadow
Sponsored by Justin Bordner

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 12/26/2014 11:13:00 PM
EARL, CONGRATULATIONS ... this is a nice sweet little HM... hugs.. Linda
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Date: 10/16/2014 3:13:00 AM
Hi Earl, I really enjoyed this poem. So beautifully written and so moving! Have a wonderful day! Take care. Amz
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Amy Sullivan
Date: 10/16/2014 2:42:00 PM
Hi Earl, its only a pleasure! That is so interesting, my father was of Irish descent and I too am an Irish citizen even though I live in South Africa. You definitely succeeded in capturing the essence of grief! :) Love your work!
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Earl Schumacker
Date: 10/16/2014 10:44:00 AM
Hi Amy, Thank you so much. I'm glad you were touched by the poem. Normally, (if there is such a thing), I like to entertain with my works. I was interested in doing a tribute to my Irish heritage, (My mother was Irish.) I tried to capture the essence of grief in a poem. Thanks again for your kind words. Take care. Earl
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