The Juniper and Pine

Like a gnarled old elder it stands ancient
twisted scarred limbs like a scene in a horror
hacked and torn against time, 
beetle holes and wood pecker assaults
not withstanding, growing and thriving like time

The outlier cousine, a younger branch
stands tall and seemly a lithe woman
an odd pair,  living like old neighbors
digging roots into sandy and rocky soil;
daring all to move them out, we've been here

Sentient, I wonder betimes, snaking arms akimbo
a stalwart grapevine too big for it's britches
Tough as an old crow, I'd say...
a thousand year old crow that is,
no sweet tender fruit hanging about, no sirree...

A bit of sun showing 'tween long needles
throwing such shade as a sheer negligee
peckers drawing clear blood sap,
she's scarred too, these small holes dripping life
a small nest teeters on high branch in the wind

He looks far east, a nod to the elders
he knows his worth, a dance to the living 
though crippling and splitting since birth
I'd rather sit by him in strength of his shade
smelling the sweet perfume of his lady friend
writing a few words on the character of age

bbmac53

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/13/2015 11:52:00 PM
HI BEN, HAPPY VALENTINES, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 2/13/2015 10:30:00 PM
Ben, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) As I hope one day you will follow and give me a few poetry pointers. We're Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Valentines day, with your New Poet Friend! Happy Valentine's @-> LINDA <-@
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