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The Jungle Untamed

Written: July 29, 2025 for contest Sponsored by: Constance La France Quote: "You Are not a drop in the ocean, you are the entire ocean in a drop." by Rumi ************* the jungle breathes as a vast pulsating lung thunder rumbles from its heart while mist swathes as if the ground were a relic of lost commas it waives itself with reptiles slinking through the scrub leaves merge in a symphony of vibrant voices while ferns unfurl as mirage slices through the sky akin to cherished recollections rooted birds come together in the canopy creating a ladder of fluttering honor feathers show rite and respond to the rain no map can steer this place, no compass offers balm the vines spin a web crafted by nature's bold hand lush foliage fosters a furrowed field with a flowing growth and decay moss cloaks a worn stone as wrinkles on a giant the jungle swallows you not from hunger but from necessity this tale ties you to its timeless storyline not as a hero but as an echo

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Date: 7/30/2025 8:42:00 PM
'the vines spin a web crafted by nature's bold hand' 'while ferns unfurl as mirage slices through the sky" What a lucid image. These very lines are enough to describe a jungle untamed. Love this poem. Again and again your craftsmanship stands as testimony to the fact that you are a master poet.
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Date: 7/30/2025 1:37:00 PM
What unique imagery you chose for this. Every line has personality. "as if the ground were a relic of lost commas" - "no map can steer this place, no compass offers balm" :)
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Date: 7/29/2025 5:22:00 PM
SP, you've described the jungle as a pretty powerful force. It's fun to think about it like this. It's getting its biggest challenge yet from us. Smiles!!
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Date: 7/29/2025 4:06:00 PM
the Rumi quote is one of my favorite. I especially liked your descriptive words and the flow of this free verse poem. So many unique lines to enjoy. I especially liked the last verse...it has stuck with me. nicely done, dear Sotto.
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Date: 7/29/2025 10:56:00 AM
This poem offers a vivid, textured portrait of the jungle as autonomous and alive. Its strength lies in evocative metaphor and environmental symbolism.
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Date: 7/29/2025 9:42:00 AM
Sotto Poet, you are a master poet in love with vivid language~~both literal and figurative~~that, in this poem, conveys a powerful message about nature. Janice
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