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The Jumper

On a twelve inch ledge On the twenty-seventh floor He tried to sort out his life. From his high school days Through his college days To the woman he called his wife. His dreams had been many But his prospects were few, Life was at best second rate, His dreams died away As his prospects grew worse, He resigned himself to his fate. A crowd gathered round To stare up at the man, They held their collective breath, He spread out his arms Reached up for the sky Then plummeted down to his death.

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Date: 2/13/2023 9:11:00 AM
Such a tragedy.! Well written!
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J. Summers
Date: 2/13/2023 1:21:00 PM
Thanks Arlene for reading. If you look up my poems list I think you might like “Leave Your Best.” John
Date: 11/30/2022 6:17:00 PM
And with him, plummeting, untold numbers of unborn generations...
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J. Summers
Date: 12/2/2022 1:27:00 PM
You know, I just don’t get it. This one here is my take on a Simon and Garfunkel tune. Best regards and stay well. John
Date: 11/30/2022 12:27:00 PM
A tragic poem, very well written, very sad. I've lost two cousins to suicide, and their deaths have left devastation for their families and loved ones.
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J. Summers
Date: 11/30/2022 2:03:00 PM
Yes, the toll on family and friends is a terrible one. Thank you for reading and commenting. By the way, nice sunflower. John
Date: 9/23/2022 3:55:00 AM
This is interesting. I love the rhyme scheme you adopt here, JS.
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J. Summers
Date: 9/23/2022 3:18:00 PM
Hello Andrew, nice to see you. Thanks for the time to read and comment, always appreciated. John
Date: 6/14/2022 4:48:00 PM
Hi J…..great poem…I like the way you write…..Debx
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J. Summers
Date: 6/14/2022 5:34:00 PM
Thanks for reading and commenting Deb. John
Date: 5/27/2022 11:08:00 AM
I posted a photo on flickr of a man who did just that. He landed feet first, his knees burst driving the bones into his gut which splattered fat like a bomb. It was not a painless end to his problems! Aloha!
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J. Summers
Date: 5/27/2022 6:50:00 PM
No, not a painless end at all. Thanks for reading. John

Book: Shattered Sighs