Get Your Premium Membership

The Joy Ride

dark moon prophecy tears fall from her lashes twisting and turning the moon and the sun both extinguished to protect their identity cheap rolls unfurled ferociously fight the terror of the night the harassed drops to his knees what has he done? the moon turns very pale barely breathing three tombs loom at first light, like creeping shadows as the media crowds the school 9/3/2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/3/2018 3:07:00 PM
Oh my! It truly is tragic; but well penned.
Login to Reply
Rodrigues Avatar
Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/3/2018 3:57:00 PM
Thank you, M.L.!
Date: 9/3/2018 1:25:00 PM
Hi Kim: I love your poems and I found this one intriguing. I know there is a profound message here where I have a guess. Can you please email me an give me your thoughts? Thank you
Login to Reply
Rodrigues Avatar
Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/3/2018 3:58:00 PM
Thank you, Ralph!
Date: 9/3/2018 9:36:00 AM
Very dark and lonely feeling Kim. Your words create thought.
Login to Reply
Rodrigues Avatar
Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/3/2018 10:21:00 AM
Thanks, Chris!
Date: 9/3/2018 9:35:00 AM
Quite the joy ride, Kim...enjoyed my friend...love & light...^WW^
Login to Reply
Rodrigues Avatar
Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/3/2018 10:20:00 AM
Thanks, WW! Ended in tragedy.

Book: Shattered Sighs