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The Joy of Running

Searing, the sun no shade on this run perilous, the wind eyes let sand in draining, the humidity tempting torpidity… steep hill appears ~ tears, no more gears

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Date: 7/4/2024 5:16:00 AM
"I can't slow down I might catch up to me"
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/4/2024 7:54:00 PM
Put a little mustard into that catching up, John, and you'll make it up the hill!
Date: 7/3/2024 11:14:00 PM
things we go through for health's good review! fine, brief commentary I truly enjoyed!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/4/2024 7:54:00 PM
Glad to hear it, Nette, and thanks for letting me know. So nice to be able to read your poetry again. Happiness and Joy, Gershon
Date: 7/3/2024 10:23:00 PM
Nicely put my friend. The only running I ever did was to catch my bus. Have a lovely day.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/4/2024 7:57:00 PM
Well, myself, I'm an expert at one kind of running --- and that is when my nose is running. lol. ~ Jogging along, gw
Date: 7/3/2024 9:35:00 PM
I admire people with the ability and discipline to run! If I had to run for my life I’d be in trouble lol. Good poem Gershon.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/4/2024 7:58:00 PM
Running is interesting. Are we running away from something or towards something? Or both. ~ Chasing my tail, gw
Date: 7/3/2024 9:34:00 PM
Run like a wolf BB....you can do it!! Good poem my friend! Debx
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Deb M
Date: 7/5/2024 3:52:00 AM
You truly make me laugh!!!!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/4/2024 8:01:00 PM
OK. I can howl like a wolf, drool like a wolf -- but run like a wolf. Hmm. My running has seen better days... except for my nose running. lol. Thanks, Deb

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