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The Journey To Nowhere

Tumbling weeds of mind

Wild winds blow the sands of time

Cowboys ride the plain

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Indiana Shaw

Date: 7/16/2020 8:27:00 PM

Well, this Haiku sure blew my mind, brilliant write Arturo . . . : )

JCB Brul

Date: 7/13/2020 9:46:00 PM

Splendid Haiku!!

Arturo Michael
Date: 7/15/2020 8:27:00 AM

Thank you JCB...even the desert has roses...

Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/20/2020 11:50:00 AM

Zowie! A charming Haiku. Panagiota

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/6/2020 9:59:00 AM

Love the blend of this wonderful haiku.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 4/10/2020 10:27:00 PM

A very nice haiku, evocative of the spirit of the wild, wild west. Hauntingly lovely. A Happy Easter to you and yours.

Mark Koplin

Date: 4/5/2020 3:05:00 PM

I'd definitely go back to those times. Great one Arturo. I like the music, nice touch.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 3/20/2020 3:09:00 PM

So evocative of the stoic, lonesome cowboy, very touching haiku-

Arturo Michael
Date: 3/21/2020 6:49:00 AM

I believe we all have that lonesome cowboy effect...Thanks Michelle

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 3/19/2020 11:00:00 AM

Somehow cigarette adverts come to mind. But it is everyone's journey. A great image, Kai

Indiana Shaw
Date: 7/16/2020 8:23:00 PM

Marlboro Reds, nicknamed the "Cowboy killers". . . : /

Arturo Michael
Date: 3/20/2020 7:29:00 AM

Yeah...the adverts made it powerful...in the end...it's tumbling weeds of thoughts and a journey to nowhere...it's not on the map....

Juliet Ligon

Date: 3/17/2020 10:27:00 AM

Well thought out. Love this.

Arturo Michael
Date: 3/17/2020 4:59:00 PM

Tumbling weeds of thoughts rolling through a deserted mind...fading in memory...as the hourglass topples from the raging winds of life...this cowboy rides...Thanks Juliet

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/13/2020 12:47:00 PM

The Marlboro Man comes to mind. Great haiku, Arturo! Cheers, Gershon

Arturo Michael
Date: 3/15/2020 9:35:00 AM

I see it too...Only goes to show you the things that impress the mind...The Marlboro Man with a cigarette in his hand

Paul Callus

Date: 3/8/2020 9:12:00 AM

Excellent mix of imagery and metaphor, Arturo. This takes me back to the wild west of many years back as viewed in B&W! Regards // paul

Arturo Michael
Date: 3/8/2020 9:57:00 AM

There's something that speaks to you from open skies or out on the endless prairies... Thanks Paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/28/2020 11:49:00 AM

Nice metaphors from the wild west!

Arturo Michael
Date: 3/1/2020 3:57:00 AM

Some people live in the wild west...Thanks Andrea

Beata Agustin

Date: 2/25/2020 7:20:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this, poetically expressed. Thanks likewise for your comments. I appreciate them. God bless you.

Arturo Michael
Date: 2/27/2020 7:17:00 AM

Thank you Beata... I admire your love for GOD...

Ann Gilmour

Date: 2/21/2020 4:25:00 AM

Wonderful Arturo I already feel the wind in my hair and the freedom in my soul... With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Arturo Michael
Date: 2/21/2020 5:06:00 AM

It is freedom...from ALL... Thanks Ann... A lovely weekend to you

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/20/2020 6:00:00 PM

Great one Arturo! :)

Arturo Michael
Date: 2/21/2020 5:04:00 AM

Thanks Heidi...A lovely weekend to you

Jan Allison

Date: 2/20/2020 2:44:00 PM

superb imagery Arturo:-) hugs Jan xx

Arturo Michael
Date: 2/21/2020 5:03:00 AM

Thank you Jan...All the best

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/20/2020 12:56:00 PM

Hello Arturo Michael, Yes the cowboys ride the plains, while the tumbleweeds passes by. have a nce day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/20/2020 5:36:00 PM

Oh yes, there are many mountains to climb.Also plains to be explored. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Arturo Michael
Date: 2/20/2020 2:19:00 PM

Thank you Darlene...there're so many plains to cross not to mention mountains to climb...

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/20/2020 12:01:00 PM

Nice one Arturo, love the image. Tom

Arturo Michael
Date: 2/20/2020 2:16:00 PM

Thanks Tom...Ride on

Charlie Smith

Date: 2/20/2020 11:34:00 AM

Yee Ha. Good one Arturo...

Arturo Michael
Date: 2/20/2020 2:15:00 PM

Nice to see you Charlie... Yee ha...probably the only thing that makes sense to a lonely cowboy

Daniel Turner

Date: 2/20/2020 10:09:00 AM

"My heroes have always been cowboys" I like this one Arturo:)

Daniel Turner
Date: 2/20/2020 2:16:00 PM

That dog is my friend, Buddy, my sidekick:)

Arturo Michael
Date: 2/20/2020 2:13:00 PM

I definitely identify with the lone rider...Thanks Daniel... Who's the dog...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/20/2020 8:41:00 AM

...into the sunset ... lovely haiku, Arturo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arturo Michael
Date: 2/20/2020 2:11:00 PM

Yes...Into the sunset of life

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/20/2020 8:25:00 AM

I see them in your photo--and in your poem--loved your articulation: blowing the sands of time.

Arturo Michael
Date: 2/20/2020 2:10:00 PM

Thank you Vijay...I'm yet to understand the loneliness of the ride...

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