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The "journey Through Christmas"

In my hometown of Hillsboro A humble, small suburb There stood a church that was more humble still In that cozy congregation We'd teach and learn the Word And try each day to do the Father's will But our little congregation Each year at Christmastime Would execute a miraculous feat! The whole town would come out in droves To view what we'd present A Christmas pageant right next to the street! The first vignette was of a home A modern family Telling of that first Christmas long ago The next scene showed the palaces Of Herod on his throne When his grim proclaimation he bestowed Each onlooker could walk or drive From scene to sacred scene But either way, observers saw the worth For every stop would reenact The story of God's love From Herod to the blessed Savior's birth The community seemed hungry To hear the wondrous news Of the Messiah, born to die for us And like them, we were richly blessed To share with all who came The spectacle-- a Journey Through Christmas! *This is a true story that I've presented in poetry form for Carolyn Devonshire's "Christmas in Your Town" Contest

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Date: 12/7/2009 7:02:00 AM
Simply beautiful! I would like to see this! Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest, Donna! A Merry Christmas to you and yours! God bless! Peace and love, audrey
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Date: 12/3/2009 7:56:00 AM
Douglas wants me to try and do a poem about the holidays,so I am going to work on it and see what I come up with.I will be thinking and writing most of the day.
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Date: 12/2/2009 12:12:00 PM
Donna, congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest. This must have been a most beautiful site to see. Is'nt Christmas a wonderful time >> James
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Date: 12/2/2009 4:40:00 AM
Congratulations, Donna on a very beautiful piece and a much deserved win in Carolyn's contest! Great memories! Lightwalker
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Date: 12/1/2009 11:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Great story. I know just where you live now. I live on a farm near Mount Vernon, Washington about 60 miles north of Seattle.
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Date: 12/1/2009 3:59:00 PM
Congrats, Donna, on your winning poem in Carolyn's contest.. well deserved win .. blessings.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/22/2009 9:02:00 AM
Thanks for bringing us to Hillsboro in your poem :) Christmas pageants sure are wonderful reminders what Christmas is all about--good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 11/21/2009 5:12:00 PM
Thanks for the turkey contest Donna and my recognition. On to Christmas. This looks like it may be a sure winner. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/18/2009 6:42:00 PM
This is a very beautifully penned Christmas Story, it reminds me of when I use to live in Lynn, Massachusetts. I always enjoyed the Christmas pageant there and the Christmas parades as well. I thank you for for sharing such a wonderful read. This is an excellent entry Good Luck in the contest. :-) God Bless, Always, Adell
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Date: 11/17/2009 5:45:00 AM
enjoyed good luck in the contest!!
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Date: 11/12/2009 11:47:00 AM
Hi Donna. Great poem. A sure winner. Oh, oh I see I have some catching up to do. No fair I was gone from home last week. Love, joyce
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Date: 11/12/2009 3:41:00 AM
Donna, there's nothing like memories of those Christmas times gone bye into the pages of our memories.Well done! Looking forward to entering your Ode to Turkey contest. Doug
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Date: 11/11/2009 3:20:00 PM
Enjoyed this poem. I also thought it was Hillsboro, NC because I live in NC. Until I saw where you said Oregon...Soup Mail...Marty
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Date: 11/10/2009 4:53:00 PM
a nice thing for a small town. jhl
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Date: 11/9/2009 3:21:00 AM
funny thing.. I was sitting meditating on a Christmas experience of my own when I decided to stir the soup and came across your Golden beautifully written poem about a beautiful and divinely inspired tradition. Thank you for that and for you comment, Donna.
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Date: 11/8/2009 3:14:00 PM
Hi Donna, Such a beautiful Christmas scene you paint with words. Sounds like the perfect home town to live in! You share your love for true meaning of Christmas with such heart. A true joy to read. Good luck in contest hun. Smile, looks like a winner. Thanks for sharing, Love Light Patty
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Date: 11/8/2009 3:48:00 AM
Donna, What a wonderful life experience. This is a beautiful tradition. And it brought many people together for an appropriate celebration of the Savior's Birth. Lovingly, Dane Ann Soupmail.
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Date: 11/7/2009 7:50:00 PM
Lovely poem Donna, Thanks for your comments. I read a lot of Dean Koontz too! Good luck in the contest. Pam
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Date: 11/6/2009 5:20:00 AM
Beautiful, Donna. Thank you for sharing and thank you for your kind comments. Love. Lainie.
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Date: 11/4/2009 5:58:00 PM
I grew up in Hillsboro, Oregon. :o)
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Date: 11/4/2009 4:48:00 PM
Beautiful, Donna! You paint the holiday scene to perfection...where is Hillsboro? In N.C. like John Moses said? (But there must be many Hillsboros)...You godda dem Soop mail AGIN!!-Tim
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Date: 11/2/2009 12:41:00 AM
Best wishes with this one Donna.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 11/1/2009 12:53:00 PM
Sounds like an enriching experience, to journey through Christmas with you and the congregation, in Hillsboro. That is in North Carolina, isn't it? I use to drive a truck and have make a few deliveries there. Good luck in the contest, Sincerely, Love Moses
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Date: 11/1/2009 8:41:00 AM
Donna, I am wishing you the very best in the contest. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/1/2009 8:31:00 AM
Truly beautiful tribute to Christmas and its true message.. the Savior's Birth... a resplendent poem not only for Christmas but forever... excellent write and intense revelation of the reason for the season.. thankxxx for the appreciative comments on my poetry ... luv being an integral part of Poetry Soup with gifted poets as yourself.. happy Sunday... Linda-Marie
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