The "journey Through Christmas"

In my hometown of Hillsboro
A humble, small suburb
There stood a church that was more humble still
In that cozy congregation
We'd teach and learn the Word
And try each day to do the Father's will

But our little congregation
Each year at Christmastime
Would execute a miraculous feat!
The whole town would come out in droves
To view what we'd present
A Christmas pageant right next to the street!

The first vignette was of a home
A modern family
Telling of that first Christmas long ago
The next scene showed the palaces
Of Herod on his throne
When his grim proclaimation he bestowed

Each onlooker could walk or drive
From scene to sacred scene
But either way, observers saw the worth
For every stop would reenact
The story of God's love
From Herod to the blessed Savior's birth

The community seemed hungry
To hear the wondrous news
Of the Messiah, born to die for us
And like them, we were richly blessed
To share with all who came
The spectacle-- a Journey Through Christmas!







*This is a true story that I've presented in poetry form for Carolyn Devonshire's "Christmas 
in Your Town" Contest
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Haick Avatar
December 7, 2009 at 7:02 AM
Simply beautiful! I would like to see this! Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest, Donna! A Merry Christmas to you and yours! God bless! Peace and love, audrey
Bono Avatar
December 3, 2009 at 7:56 AM
Douglas wants me to try and do a poem about the holidays,so I am going to work on it and see what I come up with.I will be thinking and writing most of the day.
Fraser Avatar
December 2, 2009 at 12:12 PM
Donna, congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest. This must have been a most beautiful site to see. Is'nt Christmas a wonderful time >> James
Ace Avatar
December 2, 2009 at 4:40 AM
Congratulations, Donna on a very beautiful piece and a much deserved win in Carolyn's contest! Great memories! Lightwalker
Johnson Avatar
December 1, 2009 at 11:22 PM
Congratulations on your win. Great story. I know just where you live now. I live on a farm near Mount Vernon, Washington about 60 miles north of Seattle.
Sweetheart Avatar
December 1, 2009 at 3:59 PM
Congrats, Donna, on your winning poem in Carolyn's contest.. well deserved win .. blessings.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart"
K. Avatar
November 22, 2009 at 9:02 AM
Thanks for bringing us to Hillsboro in your poem :) Christmas pageants sure are wonderful reminders what Christmas is all about--good luck in the contest :)
Johnson Avatar
November 21, 2009 at 5:12 PM
Thanks for the turkey contest Donna and my recognition. On to Christmas. This looks like it may be a sure winner. Love, Joyce
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November 18, 2009 at 6:42 PM
This is a very beautifully penned Christmas Story, it reminds me of when I use to live in Lynn, Massachusetts. I always enjoyed the Christmas pageant there and the Christmas parades as well. I thank you for for sharing such a wonderful read. This is an excellent entry Good Luck in the contest. :-) God Bless, Always, Adell
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November 17, 2009 at 5:45 AM
enjoyed good luck in the contest!!
Johnson Avatar
November 12, 2009 at 11:47 AM
Hi Donna. Great poem. A sure winner. Oh, oh I see I have some catching up to do. No fair I was gone from home last week. Love, joyce
Ace Avatar
November 12, 2009 at 3:41 AM
Donna, there's nothing like memories of those Christmas times gone bye into the pages of our memories.Well done! Looking forward to entering your Ode to Turkey contest. Doug
Owens Avatar
November 11, 2009 at 3:20 PM
Enjoyed this poem. I also thought it was Hillsboro, NC because I live in NC. Until I saw where you said Oregon...Soup Mail...Marty
Loving Iii Avatar
November 10, 2009 at 4:53 PM
a nice thing for a small town. jhl
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November 9, 2009 at 3:21 AM
funny thing.. I was sitting meditating on a Christmas experience of my own when I decided to stir the soup and came across your Golden beautifully written poem about a beautiful and divinely inspired tradition. Thank you for that and for you comment, Donna.
Sheart Avatar
November 8, 2009 at 3:14 PM
Hi Donna, Such a beautiful Christmas scene you paint with words. Sounds like the perfect home town to live in! You share your love for true meaning of Christmas with such heart. A true joy to read. Good luck in contest hun. Smile, looks like a winner. Thanks for sharing, Love Light Patty
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November 8, 2009 at 3:48 AM
Donna, What a wonderful life experience. This is a beautiful tradition. And it brought many people together for an appropriate celebration of the Savior's Birth. Lovingly, Dane Ann Soupmail.
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November 7, 2009 at 7:50 PM
Lovely poem Donna, Thanks for your comments. I read a lot of Dean Koontz too! Good luck in the contest. Pam
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November 6, 2009 at 5:20 AM
Beautiful, Donna. Thank you for sharing and thank you for your kind comments. Love. Lainie.
Golden Avatar
November 4, 2009 at 5:58 PM
I grew up in Hillsboro, Oregon. :o)
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November 4, 2009 at 4:48 PM
Beautiful, Donna! You paint the holiday scene to perfection...where is Hillsboro? In N.C. like John Moses said? (But there must be many Hillsboros)...You godda dem Soop mail AGIN!!-Tim
Strand Avatar
November 2, 2009 at 12:41 AM
Best wishes with this one Donna.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Freeman Avatar
November 1, 2009 at 12:53 PM
Sounds like an enriching experience, to journey through Christmas with you and the congregation, in Hillsboro. That is in North Carolina, isn't it? I use to drive a truck and have make a few deliveries there. Good luck in the contest, Sincerely, Love Moses
Brown Avatar
November 1, 2009 at 8:41 AM
Donna, I am wishing you the very best in the contest. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
November 1, 2009 at 8:31 AM
Truly beautiful tribute to Christmas and its true message.. the Savior's Birth... a resplendent poem not only for Christmas but forever... excellent write and intense revelation of the reason for the season.. thankxxx for the appreciative comments on my poetry ... luv being an integral part of Poetry Soup with gifted poets as yourself.. happy Sunday... Linda-Marie
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