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The Journey

Each morning I wade through fog,
hands outstretched, grasping at wisps
that dissolve between my fingers.
The weight of unknowing 
bends my spine like scoliosis,
and yet, I stand.

Questions carve canyons 
into my thoughts, deep gorges
where certainty once lived.
Each step forward scrapes 
against rough stone, leaving
bloody footprints of trying.

But pain is a chisel
that shapes the soul,
and doubt is the hammer 
that breaks false foundations.
Even as I bleed, I bloom
like flowers forcing through concrete.

The meaning I seek
may never fully form,
but in this holy ache of searching
I find something better:
the courage to keep asking,
the strength to stay uncertain,

And in the end, perhaps
the journey itself
is the meaning I sought—
not a destination to reach,
but a path that shapes me
with every excruciating step.

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Date: 11/14/2024 5:45:00 AM
Pain is the chisel that shapes the soul... reminds me of a Bible proverb. Very well written Henry. I'm about two thirds thru my journey at present, though one never knows the day nor the hour
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