The Jay

the jay a crisp call seeks the water drinks fill in one sip drops bluejay each day a crisp call until today has he gone away now blue blue
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Horne Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 2:38 PM
love this one - have never seen a blue jay but I bet it's beautiful
Andresen Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 4:43 AM
- Lovely Sara - Well done ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
A. Sharma Avatar
November 8, 2014 at 3:59 AM
Very Wonderful n brilliant take Sara! Gl in contest!
Allison Avatar
November 7, 2014 at 5:47 PM
oh I miss seeing Jay's we used to have one visit our garden when we lived on the mainland:-( great write good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
Gorelick Avatar
November 7, 2014 at 4:58 PM
I love your ending. got to check out this contest. Im so behind...Well done! BG
De Paz Avatar
November 7, 2014 at 11:53 AM
Little blue poem for a blue jay we all love now, Sara
Meade Avatar
November 7, 2014 at 10:38 AM
another silence . . . where has it gone! the sad echoes of small voices gone . . . until another arrives . . . may it be quick!! I love your nature motif.
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