The Jay

the jay a crisp call seeks the water drinks fill in one sip drops bluejay each day a crisp call until today has he gone away now blue blue

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Jack Horne

Date: 11/9/2014 2:38:00 PM

love this one - have never seen a blue jay but I bet it's beautiful

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/9/2014 4:43:00 AM

- Lovely Sara - Well done ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 11/8/2014 3:59:00 AM

Very Wonderful n brilliant take Sara! Gl in contest!

Jan Allison

Date: 11/7/2014 5:47:00 PM

oh I miss seeing Jay's we used to have one visit our garden when we lived on the mainland:-( great write good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/7/2014 4:58:00 PM

I love your ending. got to check out this contest. Im so behind...Well done! BG

Mario De Paz

Date: 11/7/2014 11:53:00 AM

Little blue poem for a blue jay we all love now, Sara

David Meade

Date: 11/7/2014 10:38:00 AM

another silence . . . where has it gone! the sad echoes of small voices gone . . . until another arrives . . . may it be quick!! I love your nature motif.