The Island In the Baltic Sea

A seaman sails east,
trailing the sight of dawn,
as the seagulls dance in the wind.

He stands with a smile,
watching them flutter
with their bright, beautiful blend.

The sailor is brushed
by a comforting breeze
while looking at an island ahead.

He stares it in silence,
with its ominous clouds
hovering with a glow of red.

Drifting closer,
he sees a woman
just standing in the island's sand.

She’s a georgeous lady
wearing a long white dress,
with a red rose in her hand.

After reaching the shore,
he leaps off the boat,
then the woman starts walking away.

He hurries to catch her,
then touches her shoulder,
and kindly asks her to stay.

She snatches his wrist,
and faces him quickly,
with a knife in her other hand.

She slashes his arm.
He yanks away swiftly,
then stumbles and falls to the sand.

Rushing to his feet,
looking over his shoulder,
he sees her skeleton face.

She rushes toward him,
and the seaman runs away
like a victim of a horrifying chase.

After climbing the boat,
he looks back to the sand,
seeing no one there anymore.

The only things present
were the rose of red 
and beautiful white dress she wore.

His blood disappears,
the laceration heals,
and the island fades away.

Standing in silence,
he stares where she was,
wondering if he's gone astray.

The seaman returns
to the wheel of his ship,
and steers quickly to the west.

While catching his breath,
he looks back shivering,
fearing to continue his quest.

Copyright 2007 INSIGHTS by R. A. Jones - Book Published by Publish America
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Nutter Avatar
December 22, 2009 at 3:40 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Best wishes and much success in your writing endeavors. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
Brown Avatar
December 22, 2009 at 3:37 AM
Congratulations on your remarkable poetry being featured this week Roderick. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
Delacroix Avatar
December 21, 2009 at 11:25 PM
Quite a wild encounter! Very well written indeed. Congrats on your poem being featured this week. Caroline.
Fraser Avatar
December 21, 2009 at 11:13 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week, Merry Christmas to you >> James
Sheart Avatar
December 21, 2009 at 11:08 AM
Congrats on your poem being featured this week!! Very well deserved. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours. May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
Shango Avatar
December 21, 2009 at 5:44 AM
A beautiful and thought provoking poem, congratulations on it being featured
Sheart Avatar
July 30, 2008 at 3:28 PM
Hi Roderick I truly enjoyed this amazing write. Ahhh, the sea can me very alluring and mystical. Congrats on your well deserved feature write this week! Love Light Truth Patricia
Brown Avatar
July 30, 2008 at 4:21 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Roderick. Love, Carol
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
July 28, 2008 at 6:45 AM
Oh! To have those sailing days again. Congratulations Roderick, on your featured write. Vince
Winter Avatar
July 28, 2008 at 6:30 AM
So enjoy reading this once again. Congratulations on being featured once more. Well deserved. Love, Shar
Jordan Avatar
July 27, 2008 at 8:19 PM
The rhyme and flow in this poem were very well done - the storyline was interesting throughout - great job on this poem - congrats on being featured
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace