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The Invitation

I do it often,
drag a perfect morning
in through the front door of myself
and make it a reluctant guest,
replace its colors with my own
dour palette, drown out
its soft voice with noise.

It has become a habit, trying
to confine the morning's 
width within my space, 
hold its edges so it doesn't stretch
beyond my reach. Its freedom
is almost an anathema to me
for it exceeds my own.

How small my world has become.
The distance from one side
of myself to the other is getting
narrower, the little room left 
is depleting breath by breath.
The light squeezes through
ever smaller windows.

And yet, as it came upon me
this morning, I was met 
with a bright abundance
that had gathered at my door,
carrying forgiveness 
for my habitual ignorance 
and an invitation to step 
outside myself, once more.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 5/16/2024 7:43:00 AM
You really are a master of your art, Paul, there is little else to add to the comments below.. but, honestly.. *applause* Blessings, C :) x
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/16/2024 10:12:00 PM
Honored by your kind words Christopher....thankyou. Pleased that you took time to read the poem and giving it an applause...valued my friend. Regards, Paul
Date: 5/15/2024 6:10:00 AM
Hello Paul, your introspective poem is a wonderful exploration of the human tendency to confine ourselves within self-imposed limitations, even in the face of the world's boundless beauty and freedom. Your artistic, poetic voice invites us to confront our habitual ignorance and embrace the forgiveness and abundance that awaits us when we step outside the narrow confines of our own making. It is a thought-provoking poem that encourages us to gain the fullness of life's invitations. Amen! - Blessings, Daniel
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/16/2024 9:14:00 PM
Do enjoy your thought provoking and contemplative summaries Daniel...in a way the poem could be seen as an offshoot of a subject you covered recently, re panic, this carrying the inference of agoraphobia. Do value your support my friend.
Date: 5/15/2024 5:17:00 AM
Paul, I'm always awake before dawn yawns and sheds a rosy smile at me. I welcome her with one in return. Songbirds call her to wake and it's my absolute favorite time of day. Morning must be forgiving of those who'd rather stay abed and sleep instead of enjoying what those first hours of the day have to offer. Now that you've learned to accept that invitation to 'step outside yourself,' life will be more balanced and enjoyable. pssttt... I know this is fiction. My comments were fun as if not.
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/16/2024 9:06:00 PM
I've always been a morning person...I like greeting the new day as it rolls off the line with its new paint. Thankyou Lin for your thoughtful comments, will try and take yr advice. Take care, Paul
Date: 5/15/2024 3:21:00 AM
A good poem. Well done.
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Paul Willason
Date: 5/16/2024 8:59:00 PM
Appreciate you reading the poem and for the feedback Jeanette. Regards, Paul

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