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The Inner Universe

INNER UNIVERSE Stars in the uptick — my inner universe a multitone, a patriotic splash, a wish — Disney-bright from childhood. The endless stretch, imagination of birthing planets - red, white and blue. The rocket pad — my eye sockets, leave the Milky Way, the inner core unexplored except by a galaxing poet. 7/2/2019 Nina Parmenter’s The Universe Poetry Contest *galaxing - I’ve combined relaxing and galaxies together

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/5/2019 10:44:00 AM

I love this poem Kim, there have been some wonderful entries, but this one - looks as if it could be best for a win wishes and hugs, Jennifer.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/5/2019 11:07:00 AM

We will see! Thank you <3 Kim

Anisha Dutta

Date: 7/2/2019 10:51:00 AM

Explore your inner universe. All the best

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/2/2019 11:05:00 AM

Thanks, Anisha!

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 7/2/2019 10:13:00 AM

Typically one of your best poems, Kim, clever and imaginative as in "galaxing". My poem about "Gypsies" is a recently edited work written years ago, based on a real boyhood experience. It still needs some work. Thanks for stopping by and best to you./ M

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/2/2019 10:18:00 AM

Thanks so much, Maurice! I so appreciate your visit and comment!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/2/2019 9:47:00 AM

WOW! I really like this one, Jan--especially "Disney-bright." Janice

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/2/2019 10:18:00 AM

Thank you, dear Janice! Having the privilege to grow up in the Disney generation!

Panagiota Romios

Date: 7/2/2019 9:10:00 AM

I love your poem! Kim, it's so much you! I am glad I met you here and others, who I greatly admire. You must win this one~ it's magic Panagiota

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/2/2019 9:21:00 AM

Thank you for the encouragement! So glad to know you too!