Deb Wilson Poet Limerick

The Indian Giver Love Bandit

He promised to love me forever
Then again he was just being clever
He took back his love
So I gave him a shove
Headfirst in cow dung-my endeavor!





** for Indian Giver contest
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Carol Sunshine Brown December 27, 2010 at 5:14 PM Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s Indian Giver contest Deb. Love, Carol

James Fraser December 27, 2010 at 6:47 AM Deb, many congratulations on your fine win in PD's contest. Have a wonderful 2011 >> James....:)

Eamon Duffin December 27, 2010 at 5:57 AM Hi. Congratulations on your deserved honour. A real Limerick Eamon

Andrea Dietrich December 26, 2010 at 11:53 PM I liked this before and i like it now. A very good one. Congratulations, Deb!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 26, 2010 at 5:10 PM Congrats Deb on your big win in PD's contest with this awesome entry my friend.. enjoy with luv and a Happy New Year too...

John Freeman December 26, 2010 at 10:31 AM Sounds like an appropriate thing to do Deb. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored place. Agape, Moses

Sara Kendrick December 26, 2010 at 5:42 AM Congratulations..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta December 26, 2010 at 5:30 AM Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of PD, Deb

Poet Destroyer A December 25, 2010 at 11:17 PM DEB, CONGRATULATIONS I had so much fun reading every entry. Some where serious and awesome, hope you are enjoying your holidays,..p.d.

Debbie Guzzi December 18, 2010 at 10:54 AM First lines meters off STRESS, STRESS, unstress, STRESS..you want unstress STRESS or unstress, unstress, STRESS... these are alot harder then folks think! Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich December 11, 2010 at 5:42 PM haha, you did one like mine! Good luck in the contest, dear. LUv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta December 10, 2010 at 12:42 PM Very very humourous and frolicsome with distinct wit, Deb

Carolyn Devonshire December 10, 2010 at 11:35 AM This is super funny, Deb!! Really enjoyed the laughs, especially your closing line. Best wishes for success in the contest! Have a wonderful holiday season. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 10, 2010 at 9:17 AM A wonderful Limerick full of humor and great message to those Casanova's out there..Deb.. good luck in the contest... enjoyed with luv.. happy weekend..I recall my entry is Indian Giver Casanova.. coincidence or fact? ..haha..