The Indecisive State of My Life

The Indecisive State of My Life
Like the rainbows of the sky,
Like the new moon before each month of Phoebe,
My life switches, dusk to dawn, dawn to dusk
I’m confused.

What is next? What coming next?
What is preset for me?
Will you answer, oh dear Forgiver?
Would you please soothe my endeavor?

I’m bit tired,
Nothing of my life expired, 
Still why do I feel like expiring soul?
Whenever there is a hope,
Few spaces to start or a little scope,
I feel like I’ve retired.

No one is touching my soul, 
Nothing is happening at all
Cause I don’t dare to do.
I really need some pace,
For settling down in this place
I look for a friend but don’t know who.

I love the evening sky, 
The scene when the birds fly to their nests,
I’m not so sure, where to go,
I wait to fly;
Just as the sun would lie
In the sea-bed after the tiring day.

Then only I’d feel
Why am I not standing on the hill?
Neither on my heel high,
Finally it pains,
My tender heart cries,
Who’s there to console my tries?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/9/2016 1:53:00 AM
Such a joy reading this poem
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Tasmina Hayat Khan
Date: 2/9/2016 12:36:00 PM
That's my greatest achievement Sir!
Date: 9/28/2015 4:13:00 AM
Thanks all for your encouraging words...in fact those work like charger while writing new poems.
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Date: 9/27/2015 12:50:00 AM
Hai, I feel the uneasiness of mind stream all through the poem. I am shown my own mind by your lines. A wonderful poem. Thank you.
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Date: 9/26/2015 7:46:00 AM
So many questions, deep thoughts, and descriptive states of being, good to read and think over...grats on being featured on the homepage this week
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Date: 6/24/2015 1:21:00 AM
Tasmina, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/22/2015 3:33:00 PM
Hello Tasmina, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 6/22/2015 2:31:00 PM
- Welcome to P Soup, Tasmina ! - A poem that warms your heart or relieve your pain ... share your own poems here with us - Write poems and send it out into the world, I look forward to your next poem :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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