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The Incredible Hulk

In the twilight of the night, shadows dramatically appear dancing by refracting of lights off of my massive muscular green body A monster’s body acquired while saving a young friend when an invention that I invented exploded Weary of this madness, I live with, I exhaust my brain to forge sanity of the beast that takes hold of me when the fire of my inner soul is released Some consider me a superhero others a mindless savage I search the universe in hope for a cure but there is none in sight for the near future My troubled heart yearns to bath in your presence, to caress you in my arms, breathe deep to smell the essence of you, to venture into your deep brown eyes, kiss your soft, flawless face, and tender lips My heart yearns for your tender love and my salvation to become human once more Nightmares of this giant green monster greaves me, just to think that a slave, I am to it © 5/19/2015 Contest Name: Comic Book Characters Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton

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Date: 6/6/2015 11:05:00 PM
LOL, Eve, I love your choice. :), Congratulations on your Comic Book Characters win. Have a good one. SKAT
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Date: 6/6/2015 10:01:00 AM
Wow.....you went the less silly route, and made a "green monster" alive with sensual feelings !! Great job, Eve !! Congratulations on your win !!
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Date: 6/5/2015 2:19:00 PM
You brought the hulk to life Eve - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/5/2015 8:31:00 AM
Great write and win Eve...Congrats
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Date: 6/5/2015 8:12:00 AM
great to see the Hulk Eve congrats on placing 3rd hugs
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/5/2015 8:35:00 AM
Thank you, Shadow,for enjoying my work and placing me.Blessings and hugs Eve
Date: 5/28/2015 10:18:00 AM
Great lines with majestic eloquence.. Your meandering of words still did not prevent your peice from giving out its message. This is an absolute 7!
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Date: 5/27/2015 12:25:00 PM
The author has interpreted the man behind the hero, (the Hulk was one of my favorites). A well structured and informative write that explains the man as it teaches the basic history surrounding his life. Emile. #7
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/27/2015 8:49:00 PM
Thank you, Emile, one of my favorite characters. Blessings to you dear friend for your inspiring compliments
Date: 5/20/2015 3:21:00 PM
Wonderful write. The hulk brought to life in this awesome piece. A#7
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/21/2015 9:12:00 AM
Thank you so much, Nandita, I love to read or watch some of the superheros:~) hugs eve
Date: 5/20/2015 12:44:00 PM
great take on the theme.. i am a hulk fan, eve... really well done!.. huggs
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/20/2015 1:25:00 PM
Thank you, Nette. I went to see the move of the avengers by myself and I love the image of the hulk
Date: 5/20/2015 11:07:00 AM
this poem is simply amazing . keep up the good work.. manya
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/20/2015 12:01:00 PM
Thank you so much , Manya, it sparks my wanting to write more. hugs Eve

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