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The Important Insignificant

She's become lost in small The oh so important insignificant Living in her world of do, do Doing so much Accomplishing so little Head down Sun shining on top of her head Complaining about the heat Can't look up Too concerned about her feet Skin once dark Now white like a sheet Better moments Floating past her head Instead of seeing happy She sees red instead You might find her joyful Unless you listen to what is said She seems alive but inside she's dead For her others can't seem to get it right Their failures, keep her up at night Her disapproval rides high She flys it like a kite Subtley expressed With a smile so bright yet in her eyes there is no light Hands by her side In fists clenched tight I'm left wondering Is this really working for her Rigid thoughts so solid Now starting to blur All those moments wasted Completly lost for sure If only she would listen I would gladly talk to her Instead she grasps onto her small So things they remain just as they were No other way of thinking occurs to her Still, I desire to see fully Beneath the critical To glimpse her beautiful That enlargened wonderful No more clinging to miserable Within a single thought Her life could start True freedom within life's art Right now and here Best moment better year A less expectant Gentler ear Then she will find Other small things that matter Becoming less lost Searching out softer ways Exchanging a sharp tongue For one of praise Living to appreciate No more wasted days Less doing More relaxing Far more Thankful Blessed okays!

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James Peranteau

Date: 1/31/2015 8:52:00 AM

Two reasons why I have revisited your write here dear poet (1) Your write is stuck in my head Richard (in a good way), and when this happens to me, it's hard for me to write thoughts! Sometimes, searching for a foible (not that I relish doing so) in the write helps restore... 'my muse' for my next write; I'm such the finicky writer. Secondly sir, your last name, is beautiful...Lamoureux: Lover. A pleasure reading you sir, have a wonderful weekend.........much love, james

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/31/2015 9:04:00 AM

What a great honour these words are, thanks for making my day. Have a wonderful weekend as well. P.s. I wish I was proficient in the language of French. Still I endeavor to be true to the meaning of my name by being a loving person.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 1/29/2015 1:11:00 PM

It is sad that people ignore the simple pleasures. The little things are what makes life worth living... I see a part of myself here. I get carried away and forget what is really important... This is a beautiful poem filled with wisdom. Very nicely written, Rick.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/31/2015 9:05:00 AM

Thanks so much Kelly.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/28/2015 4:57:00 PM

this is really unique. it's "some kind of wonderful!" I enjoyed the way you used adjectives as nouns, which is acceptable when done for literary effect and not out of ignorance (like i see with some people's poetry).Superb, richard!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/29/2015 7:37:00 AM

Thanks Andrea, I enjoy playing with words.

Monterey Sirak

Date: 1/27/2015 7:50:00 AM

This is all wonderful, but especially the last part from "Best moment" on to the end. These are words to live by!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/29/2015 7:38:00 AM

;0)

Kp Nunez

Date: 1/27/2015 7:31:00 AM

Speaking of the imperfect perfectionist, I believe you are, Richard. So rigid and strict, that it's impossible to find the little joys in moments that matter though at first glance they don't. Splendid write, as always. A 7 for me. Long time...and best regards. Kim :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/29/2015 7:40:00 AM

Thanks for the 7 Kim! I appreciate the visit.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/27/2015 5:39:00 AM

Better it is, my friend Richard, for people to learn from other people's mistakes, unfortunately though, most people prefer to learn from their own! Your brilliant writing and advise, cannot help those who do not want to be helped! Superb writing!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/29/2015 7:47:00 AM

Yes and sometimes it's best that they learn from their own for that can have a most profound affect on their lives. We live in a society that has tried to insulate their children from adversity and now we have a generation that is adverse to taking risks. I do agree that a wise person observes others and can avoid pain as well as duplicate success. Thanks for the thoughtful comment.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/26/2015 3:26:00 PM

It's so true that the small things are so precious to us, but we often miss them. As we get older, we do find that time to stop and take in the beauty around us.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/26/2015 7:08:00 PM

Thanks for all the visits M.L., much appreciated.

James Peranteau

Date: 1/26/2015 2:48:00 PM

I find many blessing where hearts are in timely motion with the reality that, love can be a beautiful thing, found in any costume ! Beautiful write sir ! Have a blessed day.....much love, james

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/26/2015 3:25:00 PM

Thankyou kind sir, I am always happy to receive blessing my friend.

David Meade

Date: 1/26/2015 9:43:00 AM

Less is more . . . our culture fills so much busyness that we lose ourselves . . . be still is something I am trying to cultivate. Another great write . . . and of course, always thought provoking!! 7

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/26/2015 9:52:00 AM

That is so true, we should take time to embrace quiet! Thanks for the seven David.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/25/2015 9:47:00 PM

So nice to read your verse this evening! A very cool stream. Light & Love

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/26/2015 9:50:00 AM

Thanks Debbie, I appreciate your thoughtful visit and comment.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 1/25/2015 4:21:00 PM

I thought somewhere along the line you'd say this is Martha...You know how Mary knew what was significant and Martha...well, she sounds like the lady in this poem. Very beautiful, Richard. Your way with words has always spoken to my heart. Beautiful...

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/25/2015 4:35:00 PM

And here is wisdom!!!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/25/2015 4:34:00 PM

You are right Eileen, this very well could be Martha. A bit of this person exists within all of us. Those times we seek to mold others into the people we think they should be instead of appreciating what could be an amazing moment.

Jack Ellison

Date: 1/25/2015 4:12:00 PM

A brilliant write as usual, Mr. West Coast Man! Mild and less snow out here for a change! YEEHAW!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/25/2015 4:30:00 PM

We had a super sunny day today ourselves, enjoyed a nice walk with my sweetie.

Laura Leiser

Date: 1/25/2015 3:40:00 PM

Well written poem, Richard. You really get into the essence of your subject. I was intrigued.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/25/2015 3:57:00 PM

Thanks so much for your thoughtful comment and visit.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/25/2015 3:25:00 PM

Smile i meant not dmile..Oops sorry!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/25/2015 3:21:00 PM

If only..There is a song which goes 'Would you let me see beneath your beautiful tonight'..Im listening to it in the background,while reading this powerful poem.Somehow I connected them together.If the look in her eyes doesnt match the dmile on her face..That speaks volumes.Powerful poem Richard.A fav!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/25/2015 3:56:00 PM

Thanks Charmaine. I believe there is beautiful beneath her critical, sadly she is living in shadows of how things are supposed to be instead of enjoying them how they are.