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The Immortals

Born of the light, shadowed by the darkness of time
Theseus knew, not the love of a father nor friend
Seen for the man he should be by an 'ancient' sublime
Bound by the love of a mother, whose love wouldn't bend
 
Raised with a mothers love in begrudging of times
Always a watchful eye and a helping hand
Scorned by her peoples, outcast, for anothers crime
Lowly in stature, exalted by Gods demands
 
A friend stood by, shoulder to shoulder
Prepared for to fall, by his side
Unflinching, steadfast, as a boulder
A voice, in the Holy Land
 
The 'Oracles' eyes are opened by that which she saw
'He' wielding the 'bow of the Gods' by his side Ezekiel
A body encased in a shroud, left her trembling, in awe
His race it is run with the Hellacious hounds at his heels
 
Bathed in the gaze of her beauty
Wrapped in the veil of her smile
Torn in the Hell of his duty
Daring to walk, the long mile
 
Trained in the art of war by the God of Gods
Heart beating rapid, but strong through endless odds
Faster and slicker than most, in a lethal dance
Raised for this War of Wars, to quell evils advance
 
Laid at his feet, like the kill of a rabid dog
Battered and broken, yet, vengeance is all he demands
Blinded by sweat and by pain in the clearing fog
He strikes at the giants weakness... with dying hands

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/23/2017 2:57:00 PM
Dropping by to wish you Merry Christmas Peter. I enjoyed reading this one.
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Date: 2/4/2014 5:07:00 PM
WOW Peter,... what a piece... hauntly stunning... deep in lore... I love it !!
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Peter Walsh
Date: 2/5/2014 11:45:00 AM
Thanks Debbie....love those gutsy films always inspiring...You wrote an interesting piece yourself I commented on....I have written a piece on depression on my facebook page if you care to read ...it's a little deep and perhaps a bit dark but from the heart....if you care to read it I can friend you as it's too big to post here, I tried ...lol

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