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The Ides of March

Upon a sullied slate sky of alabaster and aquamarine, floats a formidable flotilla of charcoal-colored clouds. And on this mild, melancholy mid-March day; they dawdle, dribbling drops of rain in sporadic Spring showers. Winter's white wonderland seasonally salted with brindled blotches, magically melts away; revealing rough-woven, ragged patches of grassy green. When Winter's weakened grip gives way, bulbs freed from frosty tombs; are awakened by the tap, tap, tap, of April's tepid tears. And straightaway, snowdrops, crocuses, and tulips suddenly start sprouting; simultaneously sending shoots skyward. Color taunts the blandness of this dull day as a robin redbreast abruptly appears; defying drizzling drops of grey with its crimson chest, ornately on display.
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Date: 4/25/2022 10:09:00 AM
Back with congratulations on your win Emile. Your poetic creativity and use of words is on full display in this poem! Loved re-reading it! Blessings of the Easter season to you!
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Date: 4/25/2022 10:57:00 AM
Thanks, Sam, as always, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/24/2022 1:41:00 AM
Excellent, congratulations.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/24/2022 7:21:00 AM
Thanks, Terry, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/22/2022 8:37:00 PM
Great season painting with beautiful imagery. Congratulations!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/23/2022 9:47:00 AM
Thanks, Christuraj, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/22/2022 12:54:00 PM
Masterfully-done piece with wonderful alliteration and imagery, Emile:-) Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/23/2022 9:47:00 AM
Thanks, Edward, I appreciate the placement and your comments, my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/1/2022 12:21:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this lovely poem. Congratulations!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/2/2022 7:26:00 AM
Thanks, Faye, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/1/2022 12:20:00 PM
Congratulations, Emile, on win! I enjoyed the poem. Blessings ~ Debra
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/2/2022 7:25:00 AM
Thanks, Debra, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/1/2022 9:25:00 AM
Congratulations Emile! This is a marvelous portrait of spring and it moves like bursting blooms and flowers shooting up through unfrozen ground. Love the alliteration and movement and all the colors. Blessings!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/2/2022 7:24:00 AM
Thanks, Sam, I love spring, it means life is in renewal and that never fails to raise my spirits, my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/1/2022 8:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your podium win in Strand's Premier contest with this gorgeous poem, Emile. Very, very deserving. I loved it.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/2/2022 7:22:00 AM
Thanks, Milit, you always manage to cheer me up my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/1/2022 5:58:00 AM
Congrats! Beautiful sight, I envisioned as vividly as you put it in crafty words!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/1/2022 7:06:00 AM
Thanks, Margarita, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/1/2022 2:25:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, making me see with vividness "... crocuses, and tulips simultaneously start sprouting, suddenly sending shoots skyward." God bless you.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/1/2022 7:05:00 AM
Thanks, Beata, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/31/2022 10:28:00 PM
Beautiful portrayal scenic beauty of Mid March. Congratulations!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/1/2022 7:04:00 AM
Thanks, Christuraj, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
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