The Ice-Cream Truck

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The ice-cream truck went way too fast The driver landed on the mast Ice-cream strown everywhere Please, please, please don't despair Screams weren't long or antispast

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Date: 7/23/2023 4:13:00 PM
Congratulations, Sara! What is the meaning of antispast?
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/24/2023 3:37:00 AM
Kim, Antispast is a type of meter that sounds like shoe, shoe, boot. He yelled ooow, ooow, ooooooow. Sara
Date: 7/23/2023 1:50:00 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading this fun write again. Hooray the truck was saved. Have a great day/week.......................
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/23/2023 3:02:00 PM
Thank you, Paula, for stopping by with congratulations. Well, I am not sure the ice cream truck could be saved but I would think if some children came by they probably got some free ice-cream. Your visits are always welcomed. Sara
Date: 7/23/2023 4:53:00 AM
Sara, congratulations on your winning placement with your funny limerick!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/23/2023 8:35:00 AM
Why, thank you, Tania. So nice of you to congratulate me personally. I appreciate the visit. Sara
Date: 7/22/2023 7:03:00 PM
Not good for the driver but I bet the kids enjoyed all the ice cream! Congrats on your win, Sara! Blessings, Kim M
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/23/2023 2:24:00 AM
Why, thank you, Kim. I appreciate the visit with congratulations. I need all the blessings I can get. Sara
Date: 7/20/2023 12:32:00 PM
cute one, Sara. Can't wait to see the winner list on these lims.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/20/2023 2:30:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. I appreciate the visit. Sara
Date: 7/16/2023 10:38:00 AM
... free ice cream for everyone ... take as many as you want ... hope the driver went well ... tragic but funny, Sara :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/16/2023 2:23:00 PM
Anne-Lise, Thanks for the best wishes. Yes, tragic for the truck and driver. Your visits uplift. Sara
Date: 7/16/2023 10:07:00 AM
A fun/cute ~ write/picture. We need to save the truck. I also did this one. Have a good day..........................
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/16/2023 2:22:00 PM
Thank you, Paula. Yes, the truck needs to be saved to serve ice cream again. Your visits are encouraging. Sara
Date: 7/16/2023 8:59:00 AM
Sara, that must have been horrific for the kids waiting in line, but then I expect the driver wasn’t having a very good time. Love the Lim… Belle
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/16/2023 9:12:00 AM
I am sure it was traumatic for them, Belle. Thank you for the creative review of my work. Sara
Date: 7/16/2023 5:59:00 AM
The horror is evident in the fallen truck. So sad to see the goodies dispersed on the street. Sending winning wishes your way.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/16/2023 7:10:00 AM
Vijay, Thanks for the wishes. I wonder if people swooped in and saved the ice-cream from melting saving the day in at least a little way. Your visits are uplifting. Sara
Date: 7/16/2023 5:28:00 AM
very clever limerick Sara, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/16/2023 5:52:00 AM
Why, thank you, Jan. The driver went ow, ow, OOOW! I appreciate the good luck ..Sara
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