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The Hyena

Guess my reputation could be sweeter, but hey- At least I'm not a skunk! Backbiting scrounger you say? I like to call it being environmentally friendly; No waste when I'm around, I can assure you! I'm not the coolest looking dude in the bush; hunchbacked, slitty-eyed and spotty But those alpha females go crazy for my shaggy back. And what I lack in charm, I make up for in speed and wit. You should hear the pack cackle at my jokes! And my chat-up line works a treat: 'Hey darling, I've got a bone to pick with you!' Survival in sub-Saharan Africa is no laughing matter But we all have to let our hair down sometimes! 15.07.19 Pick A Title, Vol 6 - Personification - Poetry Contest : sponsored by Edward Ibeh

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Date: 5/16/2020 6:16:00 PM
Great to read this one from the archives today, Wendy. You have made a case for one to at least not despise the hyena, giving a more sympathetic rationalization than we are used to hearing (and a great chat-up line!) Loved it, congrats on your win ~ John
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Date: 5/16/2020 3:43:00 PM
Back with congratulations on yet another win with this superb poem, Wendy!:-)
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Date: 7/20/2019 12:01:00 PM
A wonderful personification poem, Wendy:-) Congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Wendy Watson
Date: 7/26/2019 1:42:00 PM
Thank you for the placement,Edward.
Date: 7/15/2019 3:55:00 PM
Hi Wendy: This is truly a great takeoff on the lowly hyena and perceived its existence quite correctly!
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Wendy Watson
Date: 7/26/2019 1:42:00 PM
Thank you, Ralph. I'm glad that in GB I'm unlikely to be confronted by one in real life,though.
Date: 7/15/2019 2:31:00 PM
This one made me laugh. "I'm not the coolest looking dude in the bush; hunchback, slitty-eyed and spotty" Love the way you describe yourself, hyena. Good luck in the contest!
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Wendy Watson
Date: 7/26/2019 1:41:00 PM
Thanks as always for the feedback,Caren.

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