The Hummingbird Sings

Spring is here. and in the air... 
and there's sparrows in the sky
Now seeds will blow, and greens will grow...
now that winter has passed us by 

Flowers will blossom with beautiful hues... 
and monarchs will cross the sea 
And the hummingbird will sip, from the flower's petal tip 
while it hums in a rhythmic melody

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Date: 4/24/2025 9:05:00 PM
I finished a poem about spring recently too. Yours is so uplifting and gives me such inspiration to begin work on my garden 'till covered in leaves. Every line of your poem is prettier than the one before. Lovely
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Date: 3/22/2025 6:05:00 PM
Pretty!
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Charles Messina
Date: 3/23/2025 3:48:00 AM
Thanks, Kim :)
Date: 3/22/2025 9:54:00 AM
Dear Charlie, wonderful poet, I am delighted by your rhythmic, optimistic verse. It sings so beautifully of spring! I can't wait for the hummies to return. We start to see them by mid to late April in our backyard. Splendid poetry my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 3/23/2025 3:53:00 AM
Dear Susan, thank you so much for your lovely and warming comments my dear friend. Spring is by far my favorite time of the year. It's not too often that I get a chance to see a hummingbird, but I am always thrilled when I do. Nice to hear from you! Warmest wishes..~Charlie
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