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The Hummingbird Morning

it's sunlit silence on the twig two hummingbirds let's talk as they do March 29, 2018

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Date: 4/16/2018 5:27:00 PM
Hello Probir, the humming birds are my favourite birds next to the geese. A lovely poem. have a nice evening my friend.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/16/2018 8:19:00 PM
Thank you ...
Date: 4/2/2018 5:39:00 PM
how charming Probir, i'd love to see hummingbirds for real:-) hugs jan xx
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/2/2018 8:41:00 PM
Well ... They look very cute ... Thanks ...
Date: 3/29/2018 4:16:00 PM
Probir, I love hummingbirds and I love your haiku.. Such a beautiful moment your lovely haiku did capture. They usually arrive here by mid-May.. My feeders will be outside and ready for their return. Warmest wishes my friend.
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Susan Ashley
Date: 3/30/2018 12:14:00 PM
Ohh, I am so sorry to hear that Probir. Your captivating haiku takes on new significance..
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/29/2018 9:11:00 PM
Thank you, Susan ... today's morning is grey ... Politics - triggered inter religious animosity in the air in our immediate environment ...
Date: 3/29/2018 10:29:00 AM
I love this poem Probir. I get many Hummingbirds here in the summer and they are territorial and speak to each other for sure :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/29/2018 9:14:00 PM
Then we can try to accommodate the last line of the haiku ... Thank you, Heidi ...
Date: 3/29/2018 7:54:00 AM
This is such a beautiful Haiku, Probir! I really enjoyed it this morning
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/29/2018 9:18:00 PM
I am both glad and honoured ... Thank you so much ...
Date: 3/29/2018 3:00:00 AM
Gorgeous birds, perfect haiku. "lets talk as they do", you know I've never heard a hummingbird call, their wings buzzing, that's it. Best wishes...Mick
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Date: 3/29/2018 9:18:00 PM
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