The Humble, Brown Snail

Consider the humble, brown snail
He's only a head and a tail
No fingers or toes
Yet, there it goes!
Just follow its shiny, bright trail.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Leiser Avatar
July 9, 2015 at 11:49 PM
This is a gem of a limerick, Randy. Very clever and a great write! Enjoyed :)
Wigley Avatar
July 8, 2015 at 9:01 PM
Nice Limerick, Randy. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Regards, Viv
Fisher Avatar
July 8, 2015 at 7:16 PM
I consider this a mighty fine limerick, Randy.
Imwalle Avatar
July 8, 2015 at 7:26 PM
Thanks David! I appreciate the feedback.
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