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The Human Spirit

More creative than the wildest schemes Power released in sudden splendid splashes, Determined to succeed in gushing streams The human spirit like brilliant lightning flashes. Indisputable and determined against assault More creative than the wildest schemes, We see it in the smallest child and oldest adult Heart and soul of all their imaginative dreams. Seen clearly in most underprivileged extremes Who frequently struggle to overcome their fate, More creative than the wildest schemes, The indomitable human spirit will always elevate. Uplifting the soul to acknowledge its Maker Sometimes appearing unexpectedly, it seems But always there, deep inside, a mover and shaker More creative than the wildest schemes. FIFTH PLACE WINNER Written September 13, 2022 Submitted to: "The Human Spirit" Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Mystic Rose Rose

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Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 9/24/2022 2:41:00 AM

You have an amazing spirit, and it shows in your poem. I enjoyed your entry very much dear Milton, congrats on your win

L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/24/2022 8:22:00 AM

Thank you so much, Vie. I enjoyed writing for you so much, and thank you for the placement.

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 9/19/2022 2:04:00 AM

We have a winner!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/19/2022 8:47:00 AM

I am very hopeful, Unseeking Seeker, but who knows? I'll hope you are correct in your assessment. :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/16/2022 1:59:00 PM

This explains the human spirit in such a gorgeous way! Wow! Impressive Hank!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/19/2022 8:48:00 AM

Well, thanks, Caren. I really appreciate this coming from you.

Joseph May

Date: 9/15/2022 3:14:00 PM

"The indomitable human spirit will always elevate", Well penned Miltomn

L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/19/2022 8:48:00 AM

Thanks, Joseph. I really appreciate your comment.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/15/2022 7:40:00 AM

Nicely done Milt! Terrific entry. All best for the contest! Linda

L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/19/2022 8:49:00 AM

Thank you, Linda. I'm hopeful.

Mike Gentile

Date: 9/15/2022 4:16:00 AM

Milt, your have certainly captured the essence of spirit with your thoughtful quatrain ! Well done and good luck !!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/19/2022 8:49:00 AM

Thank you so much, Mike. Your affirmation means a lot to me.

Michael Tor

Date: 9/14/2022 12:47:00 AM

Such hope in this inspiring Poetry Milton. Another favorite. You clearly express the drive and force of the human spirit into clever words. I enjoyed reading and a fine entry for the contest. Thanks for posting my friend...

L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/14/2022 8:47:00 AM

Thank you so much, Michael, for your kind and thoughtful comments. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/13/2022 7:21:00 PM

Wow! Shades of Superman underline this one, but so much better how you've carved it out for the irrepressible, indomitable human spirit. Bravo, Gershon

L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/13/2022 7:34:00 PM

Thanks, gw. Perhaps there is still hope for me!

Bill Baker

Date: 9/13/2022 3:52:00 PM

A FAV for this dynamic poem, my friend. I really enjoy the variety you included as examples of human spirit. Should do well in the contest. Thank you for sharing your eminence talent with us, Bill

L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/13/2022 7:19:00 PM

Aw, you are too nice, Bill, but thanks a bushel.

Jenna Logan

Date: 9/13/2022 12:00:00 PM

Milt, you know me well enough to know that I don't give false praise when I don't believe it's earned. I'm commending this quatern for its content and presentation. Well done!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/13/2022 2:22:00 PM

Thanks, Jenna. I sort of liked it myself. It was a while in the making.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/13/2022 11:15:00 AM

A profound and enlightening work of art, dear Milton. Congratulations. Blessings.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/13/2022 11:41:00 AM

Aw, you are too kind, Demetrios, but I thank you so much for your kind comment.