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The Human Seasons

Four seasons fill a year’s fullness of time
  and fills the core of human shell and gourd -
in that season of youth’s Spring balm its prime 
  will reap the honied hive of years endured.
And golden Summer so brightly spangled
  from whence its firstfruits cling the swollen vine,
lest it not plucked lays withered and tangled
  only to fall a seed in rain and shine.
For the reach of time rings the culling tree
  when Autumn its rich shedding off has cast -
so begins the end, a fading glory
  in the long shadows of lusting days past.
Winter too, when the cold hoary bark wets 
and the pale mortal sun upon me sets.


               Written: May 2011



Inspired by The Human Seasons by John Keats

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 3/24/2025 5:25:00 PM
Nailed it!!!!! And you lived beyond 25!!!! :o)
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 3/25/2025 3:16:00 AM
Hi Arlo. Haven’t nailed it yet. I’m still not happy with it after all these years but I’m not curing cancer here. Cheers.
Date: 3/23/2025 10:22:00 PM
Great message Keith and theme. It was a pleasure to read. Thanks for the effort in writing and sharing... This one is a favorite. Cheers my friend....
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 3/25/2025 3:18:00 AM
Hoo-ah! Love that movie.
Date: 3/23/2025 5:52:00 AM
Beautiful sonnet Keith. Iambic meter is a tricky bugger but your rhymes are sublime
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/23/2025 12:05:00 PM
If it helps any line 2 is perfect meter
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/23/2025 6:31:00 AM
Agreed!
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 3/23/2025 6:25:00 AM
When it comes to iambic metre I get more stressed than the syllables. Never could get my head around it. Appreciate the comment. Glad to see wifey in the new pic. Not sayin’ you’re not a good lookin’ rooster but Mrs Woody is a welcome sight.
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