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The Huge Rack

Moose with huge antler rack Graceful as he roams on grassy Banks, of slowly running river Bowing his head low Eats of the young tender shoots

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James Fraser

Date: 9/28/2009 11:36:00 AM

Awesome creatures the Moose, and what a size they get. Nice piece Sara>>James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/28/2009 10:59:00 AM

Beautiful picture painted here with your words Sara. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/27/2009 5:48:00 PM

sounds like the deer's that ate my peas, where's my gun.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 9/27/2009 4:39:00 PM

very enjoyable! Sara!...jim

Geoffery Mchugh

Date: 9/27/2009 2:48:00 PM

Pretty cool name for a poem, guiding one in with something astonishing and then having a sweet nature poem about a moose. In my opinion, misdirection is poetry also, and this is an excellent combination of Ideas.

Gert W. Knop

Date: 9/27/2009 2:38:00 PM

Love this poem, Sara! Brings us back to nature. Unfortunately I lost that love I showed in my poem "You". Any loss is always bad. Thank you for commenting it. Keep on with your good writing! Gert

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 9/27/2009 1:26:00 PM

I hope you work on this one cause I see a nice read developing.Teresa

P Sheart

Date: 9/27/2009 12:52:00 PM

Hi Sara Hey, you are describing perfectly what life is like here on my property here in Alaska! Smile...Any where in Alaska for that matter. The lower 48 has this too in certain states..... I love it, yes I do! Keep writing and I'll keep reading! Thanks for your comments too. Take care Love Light Truth Patricia