The House Shines

"Can you feel the soul of an abandoned house; can you hear the whispering? " Quote by _Constance La France My ancestral house I abandoned a long time ago, still flashes with longing in my memory screen, I follow one spring on the trail of nostalgia, and retrace the time track to feel its dormant soul. Opening the creaking rusty gate I go inside, walk across the yard entangled now by creepers, enter the dusty living room deserted for ages, the wooden stairs winding upstairs beckon me. I climb up to the sprawling empty master bedroom, through its cleaved roof leak the streaks of sun rays. On the defaced wall hangs a portrait of my father, donning still the frail rosette my mother once placed. I open the squeaking window on the backyard, once a blooming garden now a fragment of wasteland. I hear the wind whisper the song of my youth, at sunset I see the house shine with golden glow as ever. ____________ May 28, 2023 Quote chosen : #3 Contest : Writing Challenge - C Quotes Sponsored by : Constance La France
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Andresen Avatar
June 6, 2023 at 5:48 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Subimal :) - hugs
Sinha-Roy Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 11:19 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise.
Kendrick Avatar
June 6, 2023 at 3:55 AM
Congratulations on this winner in Constance's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara
Sinha-Roy Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 11:19 PM
Thank you, Sara for your visit and comment.
La France Avatar
June 3, 2023 at 7:03 PM
Subimal, thank you so much for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations and well done !
Sinha-Roy Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 11:18 PM
Thank you, Constance for the placement.
Andresen Avatar
May 28, 2023 at 4:05 AM
- Memories of the soul still present in the old house, Subimal - A great poem - (I chose the same Quote as you :) - Best wishes in the contest ... a winning poem for sure :) - hugs
Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 9:52 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise for your nice comment. Your poem is also great, worthy of high placement.
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